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sh1v3r


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There comes a time in our lives when we just have to let go. I suppose I'm just not that kind of person. Thoughts of her constantly play out through my head. It's a special day, I should do my best to honor her.
Slowly I reach down to pick up a pen a paper. Without thought. I begin to write.

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I really enjoyed reading this. :pinkiesmile:

Great job. :twilightsmile:

I really liked this one.
Very good job! ^^

Made me tear up:fluttercry:

I really apologize for any grammatical error. I wrote this at 1:00 AM my time.:derpytongue2:

That was nice and succinct, and brilliant work for one in the morning, I applaud you! You didn't touch on or edit any of the events of MLD whilst maintaining coherency. Being able to write epilogues for another Fanfiction is a great skill, and one I do not posses. Great work, I'm jealous!

--Khroam
P.S I nearly cried. I was closer there than with the original. :raritywink:

@khroam believe me when I say this my friend. Anyone can write. It just takes inspiration. Mine is music. You just have to find yours. It will happen within time. P.s thank you for your support.216953>>

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That's really nice of you to say :pinkiesad2:, I've got a FF in the pipeline, it may be on my profile. PM me if you fancy helping me edit and iron out any creases, I'd really be honoured. After that shameful ,neigh, dishonourable self promotion let me say this, I got my eye on you. Stay good at this, 'cause if you don't I will hunt you down and chain you to a computer. :pinkiehappy: Have a nice day now.

--Khroam

P.S No, seriously. I'm watching you.

Listen to this piano piece I wrote, while you read.
http://m.soundcloud.com/jeremyshiver/pt-1-5-re-edit-extended

217327 I would be glad to help you out in any way possible:pinkiehappy: as long as it doesn't involve anything along the lines of blood and gore:pinkiesick:

Blood and gore? What do you take me for? (I think I should talk less to Zecora). But, honestly I would read cupcakes, rocket to insanity etc. Out of mmm... curiosity shall we say. I would never stoop so low as to... *shudder* :rainbowderp: I also loved the soundtrack you've now provided, it is very ambient, and quite understated - it's a wonderful fit. Rest assured, I will torment you with PMs and opinions ahem... FOREVER after your generous offer of help.

--Khroam

217879 what can I say? I'm an anti-troll. The Internet is infested with trolls. So I have sworn to start the anti troll revolution. I plan to make trolls the 1%. Love and tolerance. Forever.:twilightsmile:

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And they will fear your wrath. Resistance is futile, they will be assimilated into the herd. Why do they delude themselves? :facehoof: You are the creme de la internet, you all are. Remember that. Here, have a smooshy Rainbow Dash :rainbowkiss:

--Khroam

@sh1v3r

Anti troll revolution? ATR.
Really? O.O

218326 think about it. How many mlp:fim videos have you seen on YouTube, where there are hundreds of trolls, peppering the comments with lots of anti brony material. It's time to exercise our love and tolerance, and be the nicest people we can be. Thus I wish to create the anti- troll revolutio, and take back the Internet. Viva la revolucion.

@ sh1v3r

Omg, you have a dang good point my friend! I'm not trying to doubt you or anything but I sure hope it's successful, i really do! FIM is my favorite show, RD is my fav pony, and it does get irritating and sickening when i see...Uh... "Material"... done about her, or with her in it. *shudder*
Don't ask. :pinkiesick:

218701 Tis going to take time my friend. Time, a home website. And publicity.

Oh! Speaking of FIM. Are you thinking about making another MLD Fan alternate ending or a Fan sequel in the future? i'm Just asking, since this was so well written. :twilightsmile:

218731 though my little dashie is possibly the greatest fanfic ever written, I feel as though I shouldn't expound on in any further. Now I realize that this sounds cruel, and so I apologize seeing as how I left everything kind of open ended. But im (personally) putting the pandoras box label on this(as far as my contributions go)Though I am currently in the thought process for what I might create in the future. * hint: I will delve into the emotions that come with authority over a kingdom, and a war between sisters.:rainbowkiss:

150 views? I wasn't even expecting 20. Wow.

you made me cry:pinkiesad2::applecry:

Well you should be proud, that was a very decent sequel? Ending? Deleted Scene? I can't tell, but still it was SO AWE:rainbowkiss:SOME!

284484 epilogue. I don't consider it a sequel. Just a small extension of the story. Th original story left to much open. Which left a fairly substantial emotional dent. I didn't want to mess with that. In most sequels I have read, the guy ends up living in equestria.:ajbemused: sorry, but the idea doesn't strike my fancy. So this is what I wrote. I'm glad you enjoyed it:pinkiehappy:
P.s. for the love of god, who ever did not like this story PLEASE TELL ME WHY. I need to know so I can do better next time.:raritydespair: your going to drive me crazy:pinkiecrazy:

I really liked this! The second i finished my little dashie about 14 tears had fallen, and a lot more came. This made me happy again!:rainbowlaugh:

356523 No tears fell for me. Somehow. Is there anyone who could tell me why? (Yes, I have working tear ducts. No, I am not a sadist.)

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