Zack was normal (by brony standard) until something weird happened.
The mane 6 mysteriously appear in his living room and it appears that he's the only one that can see them.
Has he gone finally insane or is it some weird magic?
Time will only tell.
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Interesting idea.
Needs more. It was WAY too short.
Just a proloque.
Next part will be a lot longer.
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
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I hope so. At the length it was I read through it in less than five minutes
Ah, so it seems I'm not the only one who's had this acid trip.
Pretty short. i understand this is a prologue. but it is still very short.
I cant really review this properly because of the minimal descriptions of whats actually going on. it seemed a bit like you focused mainly
on describing the condition he lives in then the actual plot itself.
But keep going
im sure you'll turn this into something nice eventually. 
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I kind of got carried away with the describing.
Hopefully I can make the next parts longer and more enjoyable to read.
I really like where this is going. I hope new chapters will appear soon!
Invisible chapter?
Crap...
I derp'd
It should be vivible now.
Forgot to save it.
I already love it, you had me at Frozen Memories. I enjoy the human WTF crossovers and this one is already sounding promising. I for one think that you had about the right amount of description to set up the scene.
love it
You know, all it really does is hinder a person when they try to act like they don't know the ponies they're talking to.
Honestly it's not that hard to explain to the ponies how Bronies know of them. All they'd have to do is put it in vague terms like "On my world we watch other worlds for fun." And leave it at that. It might be a little awkward at first but that'd clear up pretty quickly.
Trying to dance around the existence of the show only makes it hard on everybody.
Looks interesting so far, although there are some spelling and grammar issues that need to be addressed. Looking forward to more of the story though!
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English isn't my native language after all.
I try to find people to spellcheck it for me. It's kind of hard to find anyone.
Dude...this is gold right here...so much potential with such a simple concept...please keep it a slice of life stly though...I really hate the kind of stories that start off ok but then turn into some kind of twisted, demented action story. If you need a pre-reader just leave a message down below and I'll get in touch. You show remarkable talent and I really hope you continue this story!
Dude...this is gold right here...so much potential with such a simple concept...please keep it a slice of life stly though...I really hate the kind of stories that start off ok but then turn into some kind of twisted, demented action story. If you need a pre-reader just leave a message down below and I'll get in touch. You show remarkable talent and I really hope you continue this story!
My name is Zack, so it's even better for me!
8273 That happened to me once
I want ponies in my house. >:c