Iron Will is dying.
Weakening as each day passes, Iron Will struggles to cope with his fast-approaching end. Fortunately, an old friend has come to ease his passing.
One-shot
Iron Will is dying.
Weakening as each day passes, Iron Will struggles to cope with his fast-approaching end. Fortunately, an old friend has come to ease his passing.
One-shot
Hmm.. that was nice a light. Short and sweet. Good job.
That was beautiful I like how Fluttershy got all Mufasa on Iron Will.
I actually hated Iron Will, but now I'm getting all sentimental....
THE FEEEEEEELS!!!!
This was actually quite sweet... personally, I love Iron Will. Don't have any worthwhile criticisms of the story.
Only criticism I have is for the formatting, the single carriage return separating speakers made it a little hard to read, and I usually stop reading fics formatted this way within the first four paragraphs.
Beautiful, and very, very, VERY sad.
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Others should be reading this.
I don't know what the sound was that I made, but I think it was halfway between a squeak and a hiccup. You done good.
You sir, have moved me to tears with this story, the first time I read it was last year...but I read this again, in a much softer tone, and it brought the flow of tears I haven't felt for darn near 2-3 years...Bravo good sir....bravo...
Few stories have ever made me cry, but this is some other level stuff. This was a very sad and very beautiful story, I wish to give you my gratitude. Thank you.
why does this have so few likes? it deserves a lot more. it was sad but beautiful.