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RealBarenziah


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Iron Will is dying.
Weakening as each day passes, Iron Will struggles to cope with his fast-approaching end. Fortunately, an old friend has come to ease his passing.

One-shot

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

Hmm.. that was nice a light. Short and sweet. Good job.

That was beautiful I like how Fluttershy got all Mufasa on Iron Will.

I actually hated Iron Will, but now I'm getting all sentimental....
:pinkiesad2::fluttercry::applecry::raritycry: THE FEEEEEEELS!!!!

This was actually quite sweet... personally, I love Iron Will. Don't have any worthwhile criticisms of the story.

Only criticism I have is for the formatting, the single carriage return separating speakers made it a little hard to read, and I usually stop reading fics formatted this way within the first four paragraphs.

:moustache:

I don't know what the sound was that I made, but I think it was halfway between a squeak and a hiccup. You done good. :fluttercry:

:fluttercry: You sir, have moved me to tears with this story, the first time I read it was last year...but I read this again, in a much softer tone, and it brought the flow of tears I haven't felt for darn near 2-3 years...Bravo good sir....bravo...

Few stories have ever made me cry, but this is some other level stuff. This was a very sad and very beautiful story, I wish to give you my gratitude. Thank you.

why does this have so few likes? it deserves a lot more. it was sad but beautiful. :fluttercry::pinkiehappy:

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