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A Soldiers Tale

Twilight makes the discovery of a log written during the founding days of Canterlot by a soldier fighting in the Royal Army. What she learns as a result is more than she could of possibly bargained for.

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Celestias Paladin

Celestias Paladin #1 · May 28th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Holy...

Jphyper

Jphyper #2 · May 28th, 2013 · 1 · ·

"Should of". "Could of". Would of". "Must of". These terms do not exist. "Should've", "could've", "would've", and "must've" are the words you're looking for. You're also using "I" in a few places where you should've used "me". Finally, you're missing a lot of needed commas.

Still, a good read nonetheless.

Shadow_Wolf

Shadow_Wolf #3 · May 28th, 2013 · · ·

Pretty good read this. Nicely done!

angleofdeath

angleofdeath #4 · May 28th, 2013 · · ·

Dude this is great I mean like just wow you turne a great magician into a great unknown hero that is beast

Always Breakfast

Always Breakfast #5 · Jun 7th, 2013 · · ·

...Twi, I hate to tell you this, but I think you picked up a hoax. Nopony who lived Before Common Pony Era would actually date it "Before Common Pony Era".

TwinAttorney864

TwinAttorney864 #6 · Dec 13th, 2020 · · ·

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Probably oversight of the author. I mean he has to establish a time before Princess Celestia's rule do they not? But I do see your point, this is like a soldier writing of his time in the trenches and labeling the time as World War 1