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Twilight Sparkle and Applejack, after an earthquake, escape to nowhere, and they meet a strange pony named Screwball. The pony talks to rocks, eats dirt, and hallucinates. They try to cure her of her hallucinations, while surviving.

Chapters (3)
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You seem to have forgotten to lay a plot. While the thought is based around Screwball, we don't understand what has happened thus far to the other characters. Seems to be a sparse amount of setting in place, and I wonder what happened to Fluttershy? However, I think with a bit more information accessibility it will be a very interesting read.

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