I'm an over obsessed Brony. I'm not good at music or art though. Only writing so...here goes.
[Drama]
This is the story of Trixie's rise to power after her humiliation at the hooves of twilight.
Major kudos to my awesome proofreader for the first two chapters, Cowmaster627.
Image by ponyKillerX, Check out his DA page.
Marked teen for strong language in later chapters
Minor Characters: Applejack, Luna, Rainbow Dash
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Trixie has a brother
nice way to use an OC, good story so far waiting for more 
Ohh! This one looks like it could get interesting! Ready for more!
Amazing! That is utterly amazing! I want to see the rest right now! That was an epic! A magic blue pony who need to win epic!
ROLL THE NEXT FAN FIC STEVEN!
Thank you so much. I put in a lot of effort, proofreading and revisions into this fanfic! I'll get working on the next one wright away!
I kind of want to submit to EQD but I'm no good at art so I can't really make an image. I can only write XD
I want a new chapter now!
Oh dear this can't be good.
A few spelling and grammatical errors, but nothing to bad. Keep it up; I'm interested.
I just noticed that the cover picture says "Trixe."
Envy. It turned Luna into Nightmare Moon. What will it turn Trixie into?
Aw crap. This isn't going to end well.
Be careful what you wish for...you just might get it.
Great story, though, I have to wonder what happens to Trixie now? Where is her brother? And how did Rainbow Dash get into that shield?
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First, Thank you so much for reading though the whole story! This was really exiting to write and is my 'dream story' if you will! I really like characters who break the 'rules' of their world and ascend to a level that they are not meant to ascend to. Rather politically, physically, or socially!
I figure the best stories end with the reader wanting more. I tried to keep most of the story in third person, but a few parts, like in initial confrontation at the palace, were more omnipotent. For the most part, however, I tried to make it so you could only see one pony's thoughts and emotions at a time.
Rainbow Dash knows how she got in, but Trixie does not. Bane knows why Alex couldn't read the paper, but Alex did not. Perhaps I should produce a 'lost chapter' to explain these things? but idk. I really want to work on other things now.
There were some errors in the writing, but overall a good story. Thumbs up for ya.
Of course, Celestia neglects to mention her own hasty actions where she was willing to kill Trixie also sparked Trixie's transformation.
So what happens now? Does Trixie take over the world? Does she snap out of her power trip and goes on to coexist considering Celestia revealed the true reason of her mother's death and saved her life.