Two ponies have know each other since they were fillies. Both did everything with each other, and others deemed them inseparable. When one develops feelings for the other, will this compromise their friendship?
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I really liked this for some reason. Are you planning on continuing this story? Because if you are, I look forward to more chapters. Good job.
Depending on the way you continue this story i'll love you or hate you... This is a really good start you got here... It's not usual that a fic go straightforward to the confesion and I must say that i loved the way you did it...
2608385 Well, that depends on the way you want this story to go. And thank you for the compliment!
2608305 I actually wanted to see how this story did first before I start making other chapters. I have a lot of stuff going on and this story came out on a Saturday night when I couldn't really see straight. Anyway, when I give it a bit more time to settle in, then yes. Also, thank you!
2611879 Why thank you kind sir or madam, thank you for your compliment!
This is interesting and enjoyable chapter, thumbed up and tracking, I only hope you continue this, and more hopefully you finish it.
2612288 That was the plan! And thank you
Straight up awesome. No samesexish fic that I've read started with a I confession and rarely do I get a fic were someone was turned down after confession. Fucking awesome! Thumbs up to you!
2619027 You sir have made my kind of terrible day! Oh gosh, thank you so so so much!
Uhm, commas should be at the end of every speech if continued with a 'said' tag, or period without it.
E.g.
Also, errors like
should be rewritten as:
And I laughed SO hard. Not that because it was a dead give away, but because I'm an effing sadist and the rejection was hilarious. No feels. Just LOLs.
Also, please continue good sir
2623437 Thanks for the corrections.
And I wasn't going for laughter, but whatever floats your boat
Why must you give me feels?
it!
Great story and first chapter! I
Keep up the great work!
2646932 Thank you!! <3
Can't wait to see more
2692495 An update will come very soon! I just got done with school for the year, so I'm gonna start writing again. And thank you!
Two comments. One: ...DAT WALL OF TEXT... URGH. SPLIT THE PARAGRAPH. Two: There seems to be typos and missing words, which turns the context funny actually LOL.
E.g. " I'm for disturbing you tonight." 1) You're missing a sorry 2) Octavia wants to disturb her tonight? Lols xD
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