• Member Since 6th Dec, 2011
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Elitist Scum


Hey, I have formerly gone by the names 'Obsidian Tempest', and 'Obsidian of Borg.' I have two OCs, Obsidian and Lights. (who is my avatar.)

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Big Mac walks Cheerilee home after the exasperating antics of the Cutie Mark Crusaders, and talk about the past, and maybe even the future.


I consider this to be my first complete fic, so all comments welcome.

Credit for the picture goes to joemasterpencil.deviantart.com

(I can't draw for crap)

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 30 )

This is great, I'm not the best at writing structure, but everything seemed to be in the right places.

YES, YES!!! Ever since I got word about the episode I've been waiting for some one to do more CheeriMac. This is nicely done, good plot and characters in character. And still fits nicely with canon events, like why Cheerilee was still waiting her Very-Special-Somepony. Thanks for sharing this.

In the Name of Her Serene Majesty,
Celestia's Paladin, For Honor and Duty, For the Sun and Moon

Thank you, it means a lot. I have to admit, I watched the leaked episode, and was inspired to write this because of the scene where Cheerilee told Big Mac he had something in his teeth. Honestly, I was watching that totally expecting a spark to jump between their heads or somethin.210086>>210086>>210086>>210086

please excuse the issues with the last comment, my computer is schizophrenic.

Man this Fandom delivers FAST lol

A heartwarming short story. Bravo!

D'awwwww that was nice. have my stars :pinkiehappy:

Ok... re-read

More plz <3

211261>>210882 I'll take ALL[/b] the stars. Anyway, I'm working on a story about the "Big mail-mix up", so there will be more. I'll try to create a worthy prequel. 

*facehoof* computer, why u no work right?

This is really good, man. Hope to see more from you.:pinkiehappy:

Dang I hate I am 12 weeks behind but great story I really enjoyed it. In fact that's how hearts and hooves day should have ended.:scootangel:

542323 Thanks eyes, and It'd never too late to party!

"but he was beginning to think he was apart of it."
I think you mean "a part".

900870 Thanks for the fav, and for finding the error.

this was reeeeally good! i became a Miss Cheerilee fan 2 days ago when i watched Hearts and hooves day so since i looked for fanfic i only found a couple really..but im glad the ones i found were good this one was best though.....Psst..make moar....:pinkiehappy::eeyup:

1022611 I'll see what i can do. If inspiration strikes me, I'll shoot you a link when it becomes legible

1024258 that'd be really epic! i'd love that :pinkiehappy: /)

1039243 Yes, it would be epic. ;) /)
Don't forget to fave and watch.

1056896 lol thanks for telling me i forgot to watch you XD

Nicely done love this couple ^_^

Interesting story. I think it was a smart thing for Cheers to ask; it would not be the first time a misunderstanding screwed with them that day.

Aww...loved it. Good job! :raritywink:

Aaargh, my face hurts from the adorableness! :rainbowkiss:

My eyes started watering and I didn't even try to stop them. I really need to toughen up. Well played.

Damn this is a good story

And that's how Equestria was ma- Wait. I'm getting the stink-eye from Pinkie Pie. Right then. Good show! :moustache:

:trollestia: Men, we don't know what we did, but women think we're dumb....

:twilightsmile: I thought it was cute. I wish I had feedback to give, but I'll give ya an upvote instead.

Apple Bloom might get that sister-in-law after all.

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