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Evaluation

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TheNaughtyPony

TheNaughtyPony #1 · May 19th, 2013 · · ·

meh i guess it was alright. and great grammar

Tatsurou

Tatsurou #2 · Jun 2nd, 2014 · · ·

Pretty damn good story, but it feels seriously incomplete, begging for continuation.

Big Daddy

Big Daddy #3 · Jun 3rd, 2014 · · ·

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This story actually segues into The Deadlands, which portrays the events that lead into TB, TP, TD. All of my stories, even the cloppy ones, fall into the same chronological timeline. I'm glad you liked Evaluation, it never really got much in the way of exposure.

Tatsurou

Tatsurou #4 · Jun 3rd, 2014 · · ·

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So where does Guard Duty fit in?

Big Daddy

Big Daddy #5 · Jun 3rd, 2014 · · ·

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Guard Duty is currently the first story chronologically. Just after Behemoth becomes a Guard, while he's still technically a teenager. 5 or so years before Evaluation/Deadlands, and 11 before TB, TP, TD.

Tatsurou