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Nothing terrible about this one. It feels rather average, disassociated clop in which the characters only serve the plot to be sexual and nothing of value is really lost. All in all, I'd simply say I didn't find anything redeeming, but then again this sort of story isn't really my bag. You do write well, however and nothing seems terribly egregious.
My cousin's out fighting dragons and what do I get? Guard duty.
(Sorry, I couldn't resist. I'll go read the story now.)
Well, you surprised me with Vinyl. Good job on that. On to the rest; well structured, well written, and, if straight clop ever had it, could have had an interesting storyline. It was a little overplayed on size, but not so that it ruined the story, it actually made sense with a name like Behemoth.
Overall: 7.5 out of 10.
You have talent. If you ever come out with more stories (of any size, shape, color, and/or flavor) or need help with something, let me know. I would like to see more.
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Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. On the size aspect, I was going more for an indication of just how small Tavi was in comparison to Behemoth, and opposed to exaggerating his own dimensions. Might have to go back and make that a little clearer. As far as more works, I have two more up here, The Beast, the Princess and the Derpy, which is my primary, and first, piece, and Evaluation. Longer and more complete versions of both are available through a blog post. Let me know what you think, oh nineteenth of the Bronies.
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Sure thing. I'll go check them out and let you know what I think. Always heppy to help.
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You are correct, EPFA is where I do all my first postings.
Well, this was rather enjoyable. Although...
Where do you want the lampshade?
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. Lampshade? Unfortunately, I haven't the slightest idea what that means. Unless you are actually offering me a lampshade, in which case...thanks, always good to have a spare lampshade.
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Here's the TVTropes page.
It's not a bad thing here. In fact, quite funny.
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Ahh, I see. I wasn't aware there was a specific terminology for that kind of thing. Good to know.