After a tragic incident occurs Fluttershy disappears from sight. As the days roll by her absence starts to worry ponies, especially her best friends. After a quick get together it is decided that Rainbow Dash should be the one to figure out what's going on. The problem is she doesn't believe she'll be able to help, especially if her being caring and compassionate is required.
Edited by: psychohooves and Avatar of Shadow
YAY a new story... y you no on skype?
Very touching story, only one thing I noticed.
I think that may be the wrong word.
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I am but I don't use it that much
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Thanks I didn't see that. Fixed it
It was definitely good; my only gripes would be that there were more breaks than necessary, and I don't think Fluttershy would have been able too form such a long, coherent recounting of the events concerning Angel's death.
Good work! Hope the FBC can help it get featured!
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Thanks Doc. Getting your approval means a lot
Ok I cried
Love how you wrote this, you got Flutters an Dash's personalities spot on. This is being favourited and uprated.
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Thanks mate glide you liked it
2930545 Why's that?
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You just seem like a cool guy who knows his stuff
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"Log entry 7: I've managed to convince them of my superior English skills. Next step: indoctrination."
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That was great
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That, out of context, just gave me horrid pictures...
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Me too. Reminded me of the fic Rainbow Dash and the Kitchen Sink
2931395 Well, hey, unless you are into that kind of thing
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GTFO I FOUND SOMEONE WHO APPRECIATES ME!
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Thanks. Im hoping so I put a lot of work into it
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A good idea. I'll consider it
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I didn't write that actually one of my editors did. We are going to talk about it tomorrow
So much D'awwwwwwww
Excellent work here. Keep up the good work and remember to keep on crusading!
Excellent work. I love friendshipping .
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Glad you like it
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Thank you
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A nice break from the norm I thought
2932004 i sorta agree but... when my dad died i wasnt all dad...cancer...dead... though some people are how you described... not trying to be a butt hurt...
i loved this story
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Naw I've been gone all day I am going to here in a bit
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It has been done master
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Thanks
2936680 i understand where youre coming from and thanks... ive felt like crap ever since he died...
2940135 two years ago, he died of colon cancer. he was my role model in life
2940192 thanks... i needed that... its just...my life has sucked so bad cause of this...
2940247 I know, but sometimes its kinda hard, but i promise not to let it ruin my life. ill be as happy as i can be.
2940283 ive been writing alot latley and its been helping me a lot. i have a story im working on right now ill tell you when its done so you can read it ok?
2940319 of course my other stories are up. they are called A World Torn (not my best), Against all odds thats my better one. My newest story Two sides of the Storm is getting some love as well and the one im currently working on is called Along Came a Broken Heart
Daw, flutterdash FRIENDshipping, love it
This was awesome.
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Thanks
That was Amazing. I really had some tears (MANLY tears!) in my eyes. A wonderful story.
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Liquid Pride you mean
Nice story. Figured I'd roll it up to 100 likes for ya.