Scootaloo was excited to find out Rainbow Dash would give her lessons on flying, but when Rainbow Dash falls madly in love with Soarin', Rainbow forgets her promise to Scoots and Scootaloo loses her truth and faith in her hero, Rainbow Dash.
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Good story ya got there. Maybe a little short though, you could always fill it out more. With things like, what her cuite mark looked like and longer conversations. Just a tip
Nice story, but you could have added more to it than just that. It is good like that, but a little bit more into the story could have been better.
Good start. Keep it up in more stories. I am intrigued.
I AM DISSAPOINTED! I WANTED A BAD ENDING THAT SCOOTS TAKES YEARS TO RECOVER!!!
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PLEASE. PLEASE .PLEASE MAKE A SAD ALTERNATE ENDING. E-MAIL ME. I HAVE GREAT IDEAS.
you let me down kid.
That doesn't sound like a good cutie mark. She just learned to fly. The mark is a lie!
Another problem is that... well... do you seriously expect someone to forgive someone that easily when they forget about them?
lol the shortest story I ever hade readen