Rainbow Dash! Oh no! I'm sorry, I should have flown faster!
It's alright Scoot...
After a bad crash, her last one, Rainbow Dash tells Scootaloo about her dreams, the gift of flight, her fears..She tells her to never give up, and to always believe in herself.
Sad 1000 words oneshot I wrote.
Tell me if there are any mistakes.
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omg it hurts T^T
It's nice (that means I like it)
I don't know what it is about, but Rainbow Dash Death Fics are always so intriguing
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God damn you....
Pretty good considering you had a 1000 word limit, you should consider making a longer version
Dammit, 1000 words is all it took to bring me to tears? I'm not some hormonal teenage girl, I shouldn't be that easy to get to like that. Now that you've got your 1000 word challenge, care to make this a bit longer? This would be really nice to see a bit more drawn out and, believe it or not, descriptive. Either way, best of luck in your future writings.
~SolidFire
Assuming you still check this:
...decide
ofthe weather......drop down FROM the sky...
...dive under the
serainclouds......better
then theseTHAN THOSE bullies...That'll keep you at 1k words and fix the minor grammar hiccups