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How did spike turn into this?
SPIKE AND XENOMORPHS.....WTF
SPIKE!? Kill him naow he deserves to die! DIE I SAY DIE!!!!
Nah anyway great chapter. But dont you think the equestrian army is a little late I mean it takes what two days to get to ponyville by train. Unless your the wonderbolts than its about 5 seconds.
738160 Dragon maturation is weird.
738195 Indeed. It was a very crazy chapter.
738271 WUT NOW? Anyways, yeah, it's a long way to Ponyville from Canterlot... :3
When did Spike become such a crazy S-O-B because that was freakin awsome what he just did!
738528 Did I fool you into thinking it was Dylan?
Or that Rarity died?
738569 BOTH!
UHHGGGGG
BLOOD AND GUTS
My favourite combination....
Have I said how much I LOVE your explanation of gore, Chuckles?
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRR
Ya still accepting OCs right?
NEEDS MORE SPACE MARINES.
738800 Excellent. MUAHAHAHA!
738968 MMMMMMMMGOOOORE. Yes, I'm still accepting OCs.
739055 BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!
739338
SKULLS FOR THE SKULL THRONE.
MILK FOR THE KHORNE FLAKES
739338
Oh accepting OCs?
I DEMAND THAT KHORNE IS IN THIS STORY
739343 Blood Angels player, ironically.
739354
I WILL have my blood
I WILL
Beautiful chapter, needs more insanity though. I can never have enough of that.
For the first part I listened to this while Dylan fought Tanning: Anakin vs. Obiwan
I thought Rarity's savior might have been Dylan or Cali Boy at first, nice twist. Additionally I will be looking forward to the Xenos gotta love that bunch. Make them take revenge for AJ's death.
Btw I found a small mistake in your story:
Dylan looked like one of the barbarians of old; he was wild, frenzied, unkempt and devoid of all self-control. As he stumbled back, he shrugged off his coat and jacket to reveal the bloodstained
There seems to be a few words missing. It is the big paragraph right under the Vendetta music video. The last sentence.
739953 I'm glad my twists are working.
Thanks for finding that mistake. The missing word is "undershirt". I'll fix that when I get on again.
more casualties please
You know I sort of have a feeling I know who the voice was that was in the xenos head in the pit......
Inb4 AJ is revived as Xenomorph/demon pony
741112 No problem.
741309 You do?!
742914 Mr. Herry, why do you come so close to reading my mind?
743044
Because I have ideas that resolve around tormenting the souls of the damned and reforming their mortal shells into a new and more *fitting* form.
Also you might have inspired me to write something down that has been roaming around in my head for quite some time.
743069 Good. Chuckles does indeed love inspiring people.
Salt in the wound dude.
First AJ is tortured and raped, then she's dead, and she's disrespected and they took her hat. Luckily I don't like AJ.
Also, you almost made me think Dylan saved Rarity...almost.
I've really come to love the graphic details you put into your story.I must say that you have done a great job. Looking forward to future chapters.
So much sadness in this chapter...poor AJ
SO MUCH EPIC TOO! Spike is one BAMF
Have a god one.
744285 You... YOU... YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!
745910 GRAPHIIIICS.
746299 A god one I shall have.
Well, the Xeno/Spike thing was totally unexpected. But Xenos are cool, so it's totally fucking awesome.
Oh, and another thing: How the hell did Derpy get under the rock in the first place? Is she really that clumsy?
Finally, there needs to be a wall of dead bodies somewhere. Because that would be cool.
Oh, and I'm back on the site, in case you didn't notice.
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Did you miss me?
745910 Jake steal his ipod in the night and tell me how far hes gone with the next chapter and send it to.
I may be a vampire, but I still have loyalty and honor. Oh, and I don't want to get beat upside da head.
As a matter of fact, he's going to beat you upside da head once he looks at your post.
757406 Derpers gonna DERP. And welcome back!
I will consider that wall idea...
761098 Zilcho.
762338 I assume that the next chapter will have a larger bodycount, and a larger amount of blood spilled?
Wait a second... 761216 and 762338? Shouldn't you guys be fighting each other or something?
765224 We're brothers.
768642 Um... really? Ok... Um... Mybad?
... well im bored so heres the greatest song ever
This was a triumph.
I'm making a note here:
HUGE SUCCESS.
It's hard to overstate
my satisfaction.
Aperture Science
We do what we must
because we can.
For the good of all of us.
Except the ones who are dead.
But there's no sense crying
over every mistake.
You just keep on trying
till you run out of cake.
And the Science gets done.
And you make a neat gun.
For the people who are
still alive.
I'm not even angry.
I'm being so sincere right now.
Even though you broke my heart.
And killed me.
And tore me to pieces.
And threw every piece into a fire.
As they burned it hurt because
I was so happy for you!
Now these points of data
make a beautiful line.
And we're out of beta.
We're releasing on time.
So I'm GLad. I got burned.
Think of all the things we learned
for the people who are
still alive.
Go ahead and leave me.
I think i prefer to stay inside.
Mabey you'll find someone else
to help you.
Maybe Black Mesa...
THAT WAS A JOKE, HA HA, FAT CHANCE.
Anyway this cake is great.
Its so delicious and moist
look at me still talking when theres science to do
when i look out there
it makes me glad im not you
ive experiments to be done
there is research to be done
on the people who are
still alive.
and belive me im am still alive
im doing science and im still alive
i feel fantastic and im still alive
while your dying ill be still alive
and when your dead i will be still alive
still alive
still alive
775258 That's copyright infringement!
776655 Nope i added some words so now it is original
776798 That's even worse.
i wonder how the main si... well 5 will react when they find out that it that is essentially Dylan's fault for all of this happening
777195 I wonder.
Xenomorphs?
Xenomorphs?
i swear to god if this ends up being a movie of any description i will give all my money to you all of it.
seriously though xenomorphs?
"Hell its about damn time"
800417
BALLS OF STEEL.
And a movie, you say?
887837 Thank you. I hope I can get to know you better. Also, I'm a bit of a potty mouth, so I tend to swear casually.
You deed boi?
1072758 I'll tell you below. If you don't want to know, don't read.
Dylan is obviously Rage.
The other ones are Dark Magic/Corruption, Greed, Deception, Cruelty and Betrayal.
1074227 Can I be the element of Cruelty? Ah, I'm just kidding. I'm all of these things.
Anyway, I asked Leonard McCoy if he knew what had happened to Applejack...
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Note the "He". I chose this deliberately, as it gives me an excuse to tell an amusing story: When I introduced my younger brother to MLP FiM for the first time, he assumed that Applejack was a guy. And he thought the same about Rainbow Dash. When I explained that they were both female, he said: "They must be lesbians then."
1080400 I see.
So, the pegasus who had a threesome with two Wonderbolts is a lesbian?
And AJ has a tree fetish.
1081184 Why, thanks. That is some amazing critique, Sniveh.
1080989 This is what happens when I get bored.