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Hmm. Interesting. No obvious mistakes. Nice setup. Taking a different direction than most fics, without becoming Cupcakes. Tracked.
Holy sheet.
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Thanks, I kinda got a little tired of having humans without a dark past in HiE stories.
I'll keep em' coming, as I'm working on chapter 2 right now.
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Was actually originally gonna have him use the bed sheet instead of the curtains, I just thought it would be funnier, as curtains are a bit more expensive.
207349 Almost all of them have the main Character have a mediocre life at home, and either they are complete jerks or friend to all living things. It refreshing to see a shade of grey.
My opinion is a hero's fall from grace or an evil character's redemption are much more compelling than simply a black and white storyline. If characters don't change or react in unexpected ways, the story gets kind of stale.
I hope people enjoy this, keep sending feedback.
Hmm... Someone just gave me a crappy rating. Not that I'm saying you shouldn't, but for the LOVE OF GOD, please comment and explain WHY!
I like it. It's interesting, and the new take on things is pretty cool. Overalll, the concept is a great one, and well executed at that.
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Thanks, I'm really glad that people are enjoying this, seeing as it just barely started.
I will have chapter 2 up tomorrow, and possibly chapter 3 if I finish it tonight.
Yay!
oh my gawd the perfect story for me ME GUESTA!
Awwww, that is BADASS! Dat window scene reminds me of everything Kratos has ever done, ever.
*clears throat*
Look Out EveryOne We Got A
BADASS
Over Here
Thank you that is all(for this chapter at least )