• Member Since 28th Feb, 2013
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Tender Ninja


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Have you ever been in love?

What a terrible feeling, isn't it? It makes you so much helpless, so defenseless. It tears your chest apart and opens your heart, which means somebody can simply slip into you and make a mess.

You build all those barriers around you, a whole lot of armors, so nobody can hurt you, and then one stupid person, not much different from the rest of stupid persons steps into your stupid life...

You give her a piece of you, and she didn't even ask for it. Just one day she did something stupid, looked at you, maybe smiled... and since then your life is no longer yours.

Love takes hostages. It slips deep inside you. It eats you from inside and then it disappears, leaving you alone, crying in the darkness.

Such a simple sentence, like "I think we should be friends" becomes a glass splinter, piercing through your heart, leaving wounds what will not heal, but only become worse as the time progresses.

It hurts. A true pain, not only in your head. It's a pain of soul, true pain, which enters inside you and tears you apart.

I hate love.

The story is humanized. All characters here are humans. No anthro, just human beings, but with horns and wings and all that stuff. You have been warned.

This story is being rewritten
Jeff's personality is based off of mine. You can call this a self-insert, but that's what is easier for me to create and expand. Note that it's only based on me.
I'm looking for a proofreader... Really could use one.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 5 )

You know, saying that this is a humanized story would have been a nice heads up. I wouldn't have wasted my time on it.
You should put that it is one in the description.

It was rather good so far...
I'm not too keen on the center writing though...:applejackunsure:
And I would space between the lines if I were you...
But i'm intrigued with what's going to happen so... have a fav:twilightsmile:

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Good God, I swear there WAS a space between the lines... I guess imporitng this from Google Docs ain't the best thing I could do.

Thanks for your comment. I appreciate your opinion, and this comment actually encouraged me to start writing the 3rd chapter of this story. I have a lot of ideas about it, but the problem is I have some difficulties pulling everything together.

I gotta edit all these... Curse you, Celestia.

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