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2561058 Glad you like it, More on way thankfully, Ill keep it same standard if not better.
Jesus christ, he looks like he either has some sort of flesh eating virus, or he was in the sun too long.
My lord that cover art is an abomination. Is he some sort of freaky burn victim? WTF is that on his forehead?
2561534 I'm not sure we want to know.
It's never good when a reader's first thought after seeing your story's cover art/main character is "Jesus. What the hell is that?"
2561652 haha I need something else in terms of the cover art, didnt really want to resort to an original picture grabbed off the Internet, but I'm getting a feeling it might be a good idea huh? I'll get on it. Cheers for the advice and love the banter
2561898 Lol, its a good point, didnt want to just settle for an original GOW pic though, however i'm now assuming that it might help. A diseased looking Kratos aint gonna get much attention other than people pointing out he looks diseased lol. Cheers
I like the interaction between Kratos and the Ponies. AND FINALLY, someone who isn't going to make Celestia look bad and neither Luna.
Please continue!
To the next chapter!
Um, can someone explain to my why the cover art is so important? I mean, I saw stories getting disliked because there was a pony from pony-maker on it. Why, I honestly don't know.
Indent new paragraphs. It makes it look a lot more professionally done and is a lot more pleasing to the eye then a mountain of text. In case you don't know how to indent new paragraphs just go to the start of a paragraph and hit the Tab key in your keyboard.
2571853 Cheers for the advice doing it now. Also think most people know the tab button, or should anyway haha.
Btw only guessing the usernames named after FFXII, if so love it, if not it's still good.
Not bad. I really recommend a proofreader though.
2625562 Yeah cant be bothered finding one though. I do try to read it before. But thanks for pointing that out.
No matter what, I just keep imagining Cadance, used as a slave for Hades. Kratos will be pissed...
2762735 that would a lot more with the writing tbh. But dunno if I will do it. Potentially would be cool
2766011 was originally going to have him human, then decided that a pony Kratos would have some humour to it. but we will need to see what happens.
3068690 haha sorry about the wait bud. I'm hoping next chapter is out soonish but I'm still saying about a month
3071388 as long as that chapter was OK? Lol
I see large improvement chapter by chapter; keep it up!
*finishes GoW III*
*goes on FIMfiction*
*sees this*
BUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK YEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!
3722971 I'm glad. That's exactly what I done, except the one I was reading stopped halfway which was annoying! So I won't be doing that thankfully.
P.S. how satisfying was killing Hermes?!
3726139
That little B*** got what he deserved!
I think the whole game is worth replaying just for the fight against Zeus.
3726571 Damn right he did. Yeah great game, think 3 has the best Boss fights yet I still prefer 2 fr some reason. All great games though.
3733952 That better be good boyo!
P.s. you may know what's coming up...
I just don't get something. You spell Zeus differently all the time. Sometimes you get it right, and sometimes it's "Zues". Any reason?
3824925 Yeah reason is I'm stupid. I have noticed I spell it Zues (which I think is wrong) when I'm typing quickly and I should get it right when I'm thinking about it. Its just a weird name tbh Zeus. Also for some reason that I have just checked there Zues isn't picked up by autocorrect, which sucks!
So in short its normally just me typing quickly, hopefully it should stop now that you've pointed it out :P
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