God of War meets My Little Pony. Zeus has declared war on Equestria, with Celestia fearing the worst she goes to extreme lengths. Kratos is used to Deities playing with him, but Celestia has promised his vengeance, in return for his help.
2561652 haha I need something else in terms of the cover art, didnt really want to resort to an original picture grabbed off the Internet, but I'm getting a feeling it might be a good idea huh? I'll get on it. Cheers for the advice and love the banter
2561898 Lol, its a good point, didnt want to just settle for an original GOW pic though, however i'm now assuming that it might help. A diseased looking Kratos aint gonna get much attention other than people pointing out he looks diseased lol. Cheers
Um, can someone explain to my why the cover art is so important? I mean, I saw stories getting disliked because there was a pony from pony-maker on it. Why, I honestly don't know.
Indent new paragraphs. It makes it look a lot more professionally done and is a lot more pleasing to the eye then a mountain of text. In case you don't know how to indent new paragraphs just go to the start of a paragraph and hit the Tab key in your keyboard.
2571853 Cheers for the advice doing it now. Also think most people know the tab button, or should anyway haha. Btw only guessing the usernames named after FFXII, if so love it, if not it's still good.
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2561058 Glad you like it, More on way thankfully, Ill keep it same standard if not better.
Jesus christ, he looks like he either has some sort of flesh eating virus, or he was in the sun too long.
My lord that cover art is an abomination. Is he some sort of freaky burn victim? WTF is that on his forehead?
2561534 I'm not sure we want to know.
It's never good when a reader's first thought after seeing your story's cover art/main character is "Jesus. What the hell is that?"
2561652 haha I need something else in terms of the cover art, didnt really want to resort to an original picture grabbed off the Internet, but I'm getting a feeling it might be a good idea huh? I'll get on it. Cheers for the advice and love the banter
2561898 Lol, its a good point, didnt want to just settle for an original GOW pic though, however i'm now assuming that it might help. A diseased looking Kratos aint gonna get much attention other than people pointing out he looks diseased lol. Cheers
Um, can someone explain to my why the cover art is so important? I mean, I saw stories getting disliked because there was a pony from pony-maker on it. Why, I honestly don't know.
Indent new paragraphs. It makes it look a lot more professionally done and is a lot more pleasing to the eye then a mountain of text. In case you don't know how to indent new paragraphs just go to the start of a paragraph and hit the Tab key in your keyboard.
2571853 Cheers for the advice doing it now. Also think most people know the tab button, or should anyway haha.
Btw only guessing the usernames named after FFXII, if so love it, if not it's still good.