nine teams are now racing across the country for a quarter of a million bits, and to be the winners, of the amazing race equestria
Note:spike is the host
nine teams are now racing across the country for a quarter of a million bits, and to be the winners, of the amazing race equestria
Note:spike is the host
Looks really good but I would have either changed or added two teams. The first would be Derpy and the Doctor, to represent the disabled that are always on the show. The second would be Rarity and Fluttershy to represent the bimbos who either mess up really quickly, surprise everyone, or rely on the all guys team to help them.
Still like the premise and can't wait to read more.
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I intended to have 11 teams at first, but, I couldn't think of any more locations, I'm already gonna have to double them anyway, It was just a bit hard to find more locations, sorry.
But thanks for liking it! I'm not hesitating to stop this, you can expect the next chapter soon
Dang! With this race, I'm surprised that the princesses didn't enter! But then again, it would be unfair, right?
I wonder what team will get the boot again. This will get interesting big time.
Hmm, I'm liking this story! Just a thought though, if you take them to the Crystal Empire, the leg after that one should take place at Canterlot High in the alternate universe.
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Thanks for enjoying it! I'll try to make it as interesting as possible.
And yes, the princesses would've not been stressed or had a hard time, they would know too much and would have obviously won.
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Ermagawshmershperteterz, the altenate universe! Thanks for the suggestion I will definentley include
I don't like the movie that shalt not be named
But if you use it in THIS fan fic I will love you
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Are you talking about EQG?
I may or may not include that, if it's not EQG, I really don't know another movie so... Oh well
3350186 .... They could go too a previous generation
I would recommend 3 or 3.5
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ERMAHGAWSHMOARIDEAS! Thanks so much! I will definentley do something like that.
Well, maybe, I've only seen the first episode of gen 1 and the newborn cutie one, it seems like I'll have to do some studying.
3350255dont listen to the bronies who complain about previous generations they arent that bad i grew up with them
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Gen 1 was great, cutie newborn on the other hoof, sorry if you liked it, but it just wasn't good (in my opinion.)
3353380 i grew up with g3 and only the movie and 10 episodes
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Okay, the G3 before newborn cuties, was pretty okay, I still liked g1
Nice new chapter. I wonder who will get eliminated next.
If I got any answers to the questions, I will let you know.
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Okay thanks
Racing time!!!
Somepony's going home!!!
Seeing Rainbow Dash and Applejack in a catfight is AWESOME!!!!!
Somepony's going home!!!
Hmm I personally want twilight cause she has a big advantage
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Lol I had to, I knew they had to fight in the race
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Want twilight to win or lose?
3360243 LOSE
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I see
Nicely done, looking forward to the Crystal Empire, and possibly Canterlot High... (mostly cause I want to laugh my butt off reading how they struggle to get accustomed to arms and legs )
Whoa! Sorry it took so long to check this out. I just saw the chapter. Good job. Poor Mr. and Mrs. Cake. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Really sorry I took so long, my life was blocking my way.
As for the cakes, this was planned from the start, sorry if you liked the team, they just werent cut out to be the winners.
I'll be sure to hurry a bit more up on next chapter
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Well, to be honest, I didn't pick a fave team yet. I am just feeling pity for their loss.
Also, I had put up a blogger post that talks about this story. I update it to see which teams remains.
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OMG...I feel so..hounered...-sniff-
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Uh, where's the new chapter? I got an update about it but I don't see it.
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Oh, sorry, I accidentally published it before it was ready, I really apologize
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sorry for the big wait, but new chap is out!
All right, glad to see this story updated...and man, things are getting intense. Nice job! :
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thank you very much,
and again, sorry for the big wait, I gotta get more productive!
something is wrong here.
Apple Bloom said they do ancient ie. hoof pong yet they go play on the P.E.S?
If both games are on the system your descriptive skills are at fault as i see hoof pong as a real physical task rather than virtual.
or rather the ancient pong system she showed him in that episode either way it is not on the P.E.S.
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self insert team. I wondered who they were, please don't make them win.
when this is done do a season two with more teams, different teams, reccuring teams and more locations just check the updated map for ideas and Twilight now has a fully functoning portal.
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if this does not take plaze after rainbow rocks that won't work the portal is closed, spare the other universe till the sequel. As the functioning portal would then be in ponyville, and no you can not mess with the timeline with this, there is no time.