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I need more colts to fight...please give me your O.C'S
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Here's an Oc if you want him, plus I got a couple of other you could use as well if you're interested.
2538456 sure bro....just tell me there names, if they are good and/or bad, there theme song, and why I should have them!!!! That should be eazy
2541702His name is Beat Bot, and he enjoys is video games and music. He's kinda chill and relaxed, and also does bits of writing in his spare time. Don't really know about a theme song, but the two songs stuck in my head right now are 'Nothing Else Matters' and 'King Nothing' by Metallica so I guess you can just use one of those.
2541716 IS he a good or bad person
2541889 I guess he'd be a good person, though in terms of games he would be Chaotic Good, not evil though acting in his interests and not getting rules get in the way of what he thinks is right.
2537469 Just name them after moves, like Shining Wizard, Moonsault, Senton Bomb, Sunset Flip, Flying Tope, Pile Driver, Frankensteiner, Figure Four, or Hurricanrana. Frankensteiner and Hurricanrana could even be a tag team. Since they are basically the same move.
Edit:
Just thought of a couple more: Chokeslam and Tombstone.
I have my own wrestling mlp story
Hay just thought i'd leave an OC for ya.
Name: Invictus Soul
bad but in the sense of a Chaotic neutral, he Is just as likely to help a good guy as much as a bad.
Invictus is a sarcastic smooth-talker with the skills to back him up. He simply fights because her enjoys the adrenaline and the challenge. He will NEVER back down from a fight no-matter who it is. He enjoys stirring the pot and then seeing who he should help out. Partial to ice-cream and Milkshakes.
Theme song : Either: This or This
2581295 It shall be Breaking Benjamin - I Will Not Bow (the second one) It falls in my rules of the song
2581288 I like mine better
My OC will be called samafoo, his theme is europa by globus, he likes fluttershy, and his finisher is Death Dfyer (Spinning facubuster.)
samafoo also has blue skin, yellow mane, emerald cutie mark.
signatures: corkscrew round house kick, swinging reverse ddt
type: high flyer
good or bad: good
like?
2647819 he is a good character...I like him...but...I need more bad...I have like MILLIONS OF GOOD
2658252 I'll give you a bad guy if Samafoo stays good OK?
Good:
Name: Red War
Theme: Sheamus Theme
Signature: White Noise
Finsher: Top Rope Brogue Kick
Type: High Flyer and powerhouse
Bad or Good: Good
Bad guy:
Name: Marcus
Nickname: The Best
Accompained by: Trixie
Theme: Austin Aries theme
Signature: reverse Snapmare Driver
Finsher: Running Swing Neckbreaker
Good or Bad: Bad
2658816 I'm sorry but I'm gonna have to decline Samafoo!
2670552 Marcus is a good character (they both are good but I'm only looking for Heels)
One question dose he like or hate Jason!?
2671575 Can I Make Red War Align with Jason?
2671725 No
2671741 then I will make him attack Sky Fire
If there is a person out there that likes my stories that make's PMV's I need Help...make PMV's of the character I choose for them please!
What are PMVS?
Name: Red War
Theme: The Shield theme
Signature: Jumping stomp to back of oppenents head
Finsher: Springboard knee
Type: High Flyer
Bad or Good: bad
Name: Frostbite
Theme: The Sheild Theme
Signature: Snap DDT
Finsher: Headlock Driver
Type: Heavyweight
Bad or Good: Bad
Name: Psych
Theme: Shield theme
Signature: Back Drop neckbreaker
Finsher: Spear
Type: Powerhouse
Bad or Good: Bad
2689204 to tell ya bro! I can't allow you to have more than two characters
and only one can have superstars themes 
OK I understand. P.S. Im Samafoo's brother. Im more nicer than that doodlefoot.
2693943 Ill just keep Red and Frostbite
With the millions and millions of bronies out there. There is no chance in hell that this story will suck.
For people who hate this story and bronies. WE GOT TWO WORDS FOR YA!
SUCK IT!
2712633 YOU ARE TO COOL MAN
Ill try to make a pmv
First of all! There are too many exclamation points!
Secondly! Whenever someone new is talking, you should start a new paragraph! Also, you should separate dialogue from the rest of the text! The advantages of this are twofold! It is proper grammar! It will also make your story easier to read! Furthermore, all of your
should be *censored*!
when is my oc going to be in the story
2750528 bro! Let me tell ya something! I'm a brony that watches WWE! My faveorite Faction in WWE IS D-X because they remind me of me! What makes you think I care about what you think?
2782122
I DON'T KNOW HIM! I truly don't!
2782134 I'm his older brother
deal with it
2782180 NO HE'S NOT! I DON'T KNOW HIM!
FUH
Okay EWE Fans! EWE Now has a Twitter page!
EWE Updates will tell you all you need to know about EWE!
2537469Can i give my oc here
3593389 Yes
Okay EWE Fans...CONTEST!
Who ever can draw the best EWE design, gets to guest star on EWE or Friendship is embarrassing! The contest is easy, just fallow the rules:
1) Must show Jason(or Azreal), Quick-Bolt, and the announcers (Pinkie Pie and Spike or Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle)
2) No Clop!
3) One special Move! (Bite your tongue, Rainbow Smash, Blood Harvest, etc)
4) The fans happy or angry
5) Be creative!
6)Color and cutie marks are NEEDED to be correct! If you don't know what they are, ask me!
Winners of the contest will be said on EWE!
First: Recommendation and Guest starring on EWE or Friendship is Embarrassing!
Second: Recommendation and Guest staring on what ever the first place doesn't choose!
Third: Recommendation!
So Start your pencils!
- Love Jason!
3601693Yay
3602414 Whats your OC?
3612779 ill send you a email
1.) You have a full stop here, so "the" should be capitalized.
2.) It is spelled "titantron."
It is spelled "titantron." I can see this is going to be a thing...
You need a comma between these words.
You need a comma between these words.
The comma after "eyebrow" should be a period and the w in "we'll" should be capitalized. There should be spaces between the ellipsis and the emboldened words, and the emboldened words should be capitalized. Otherwise the entire paragraph is a run-on sentence.
The "what" is the beginning of a new sentence, so it should be capitalized and there should be a space between it and the ellipses. There should also be a space between "mother" and the asterisks.
"Is" should be "his," and "he" should be capitalized.
1.)
"Self."
2.) The comma here should be a period.
3.) The comma here should be a period, the quotation mark is superfluous, and "well" should be capitalized.
"Love" does not need to be capitalized, and "someone" is one word.
1.) Since you did not capitalize it in any other time you mentioned it, it should not be capitalized here. But at least you spelled it right.
2.) Depending on what this guy's name is, you are going to need a comma somewhere. If his name is "Frost" the comma should be between "kid" and "Frost." If it is "Kid Frost," it should be between "new" and "Kid." And if his name is "The New Kid Frost," well, then you do not need another comma.
The comma at the end should be a period.
"Paint" does not need to be capitalized, and this is the wrong "breaks."
1.) This whole sentence... I do not even know where to begin.
2.) "Shocked" should be "shook."
3.) The comma after "head" should be a period.
"Headset" is one word.
This sentence makes no sense.
"Hooves."
1.) There should be a period between "wife" and "got" and "got" should be capitalized.
2.) "Pick" should be capitalized.
1.) This should be "unconscious."
2.) This would read better as "offstage and out of the arena."
It is spelled "titantron."
I am unsure whether the masked pony is making a pun, or if you just misspelled "hurt."
There should be a comma between these words.
Oh, boy. 1.) "Commands" should be "demands" and there should be a comma after it.
2.) The comma should be a period and "you" should be capitalized.
3.) The comma should be period and the close quotation mark is too far away.
4.) The comma should be a period and "all" should be capitalized.
5.) There should be commas between "want" and "Jason" and between "Jason and "is."
6.) "As" should be "like."
7.) The comma should be a period and "get" should be capitalized.
8.) The comma should be a period.
9.) "Ring" maybe?
10.) There should be a "him" between these words.
11.) It is spelled "titantron."
12.) There should be a comma between "happen and "Jason."
13) There should be a comma between "sorry" and "Rainbow," the comma after "Dash" should be a period, and "the" should be capitalized.
14.) "It" should be "he."
This is not even including all the constant tense switching between past and present tense. There were just too many of those to point out.
I like this story, and I am glad to see that it is not dead.
KBO.
i love it can't wait for the next