• Member Since 10th Mar, 2012
  • offline last seen Dec 16th, 2016

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Ever since they got back from the hospital, Caramel has been very unsure of himself. How can he be a dad when he screws up so much? How can he be expected to care for something so helpless? He doesn't know. But, sometimes, the smallest things can make the biggest difference.

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A few grammar errors, but still pretty good.

A bit of polishing needed........
But amazing nonetheless.

Simply amazing

Beautiful, beautiful piece of prose. I love how you captured Caramel's emotional journey from insecurity to determination. Plus, the parts with AJ were super-cute. If there's anything more I'd want from this story, I'd want a non-abridged version of how AJ and Caramel got together.

I have no children, and this is exactly how I will react when the time comes (please love me Sasha!), word for word. Good work.

Keep writing love it you may be the star of the writers one day my friend:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart:: also very heart warming! And emotional:fluttercry::raritycry:

That was so sweet. Awesome. This story really just made me cry happy tears.

Daaaaaaaawwwwwwww :rainbowkiss:
If you can I would like to see a sequel plz :pinkiesad2:

I don't normally go for the Caramel Apple Pairing. Frankly, she is too good for him. But as a Dad, and a bit of a screwup this really hit me where I live. Wonderful, absolutely wonderful!

Happy 10th Anniversary!

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