As you all know Scootaloo is a Cutie Mark Crusader but she never has been given a back story so these are my ideas on how she came to be in Ponyville
As you all know Scootaloo is a Cutie Mark Crusader but she never has been given a back story so these are my ideas on how she came to be in Ponyville
Interesting
2520769 Thank you!
Sorry I didn't finish the story until now. It's done it may be short, but i did spend a lot of time and thought on this. Thank you everyone for reading!
This chapter seamed a little rushed and could have been paced better. But, aside from that good chapter.
Don't you think the "don't go back to cloudsdale until you get your cutie mark" was a bit harsh?
It's still a good story
sorry but you rushed this entire fic
2537113 I'm sorry I rushed it this was my first fan fic so I honestly wasn't all that sure how to write them
thats ok i personaly dont write but i love to read and i think you have talint but you need to just work at it more and sorry if i sounded like a *ick i somee times get that way but dont worry i find all the misstakes in even the perfesonly writen book i read
2543243 It's fine. I don't mind really. I do admit it is very rushed compared to a story I just read, I'm trying to put that in my other story but it's just not working. LOL
just keep it up try writeing it out on paper then have someone read it then goback and read it your self and see if there is any thing you would chang then revise it that wat my sister dose and shes gotin pritty good she has an account no here. (Name: silverstream595) you should check out her stuff its a littel morbid but good
2543562 Alright I'll look at it. Thanks!
Its a really well written story for a first fanfic! My first fanfic (the 2 first chapeters) looked more like a skript... they where... empty... xD but as i said, Very well done!
This story might be short, but it is really well made! I wish i could write this good in school
2561890 Thank you
2562145 welldone