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AuroraDawn


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Trixie has been driven by vengeance to become a better magician than any other pony. But when she finally achieves this, her thirst for power shows no end, bringing Trixie to consider grander schemes than a successful career, and into plots of a more... treasonous nature.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 26 )

Another one of my favourite stories migrates to Fimfiction :twilightsmile:

Here have a cute image of Twilight in gratitude.

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Oh hey, you finally put it on FimFiction :twilightsmile:

I still think you should finish it some day.

is there something wrong with my pc or is chapter 5 the same as chapte 4?


anyway awsome story :pinkiehappy:

199891 It's true. your computer isn't messed up. I figured that out just by looking at the word count!

Fixed the chapters~

You created an absolutely amazing duo there! Please continue this story!

I find it rather sad how little views this story has... It's just too awesome to not be known by everypony! But yea, this truly is an amazing fic and should be continued. :derpytongue2:

This is an excellent story that really needs more views. However, may I suggest that you add a space between paragraphs? It currently looks like a huge wall. Other than that, this is great. Please continue.

I can't wait until you finish it...
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...You are going to finish it, right?

836165

Nope! =D

Unfortunately, the story got too far away from what I had planned with it. The concept I was going for required too much explanation in order to make sense, and I didn't start it properly.

As well, the readership on it sort of... completely died. I decided to work on more fruitful projects.

846687
Um...
*various profanities*
I'm calm now. Shame, this looked real good.

This fic is underrated.
Why hasn't so many people read it yet?

I believe many fans are familiar with the concept of Trixie seeking revenge. However, I believe that there are very few fanfictions like this which take it a step further by illustrating her potential hunger for power and the events to come of it. This is why I find Subject of Revenge so appealing especially at the first chapter.

This should almost be part of the show, I love this story!!! :twilightsmile:

This is an incredible story continue it NOW!:flutterrage: plese?:fluttercry:

You need to finish this fic. Seriously, this could turn out pretty epic. Please? :fluttershysad:

846687 That's quite a shame I loved this :raritydespair: but i guess it can't be helped. i hope you consider a rewrite in the future. :pinkiehappy:

Technically all u need to add to the description are four simple things
...or will she?

I created an account to express how depressed I am that this story won't continue. (I would put sad faces, but there aren't enough)

its so sad that this is on permanent hiatus :(

“Hush. Trixie only keeps those useful to her around. Now, the proposition. How would-”

Darth Trixie

It wasn’t the exposure of her lies that upset Trixie so much; rather it was the manner in which it had happened. I mean really, Trixie thought. They brought an actual Ursa into the town, woke me up way past midnight, and expected me to just magically make it disappear on a whim.

“Morons,” she complained.

I know, right? :scootangel:

“There’s... no way. Impossible. Trixie may be the best unicorn around, but there’s no way she... Criticality doesn’t exist. I couldn’t have... Trixie. Trixie couldn’t have survived one. But...”

She could to survive! :twilightsmile:

“Actually I think my problem is more of a situational thing whereas you’re just a bi-”

Meh...if Strater can call someone like Trixie, who has just allowed him to join her on the road, a bi-, then the real problem for Strater is that he's an as-.

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