FMTM fully rewritten · 2:32pm Dec 8th, 2019
Gonna add a short chapter afterwards like I did with Psycho's story.
Edit: Does anyone remember what I was supposed to do after this?
Gonna add a short chapter afterwards like I did with Psycho's story.
Edit: Does anyone remember what I was supposed to do after this?
That was especially painful. Yeesh. 3.3k words to work with.
Just two more, and this chapter gained, like, 500 words I think.
It's because I started writing a new book with a dragon as the main-character and have been writing a chapter a day like in the early times of Fimfic. And it's JUST like back then, because if I don't write regularly for this, I start getting headaches again.
So I'm still here and I'm still helping a few people with their stories, but I'm focusing on Reverted Scales.
Link on the right.
I know this is basically hoping, and that leads only to disappointment, but if anyone can tell me what they think of the rewrite so far that'd be a lot of fun for me.
But I have to.
Halp!
Sorry for not yet publishing the third chapter. I've been preoccupied irl with things (Such as my other tooth snapping in half) and working on Lunar Necromancer. It's movin' along, though.
For those that like the story, I was wondering if you wanted the cover to remain as it is as a sense of 'classic fidelity', or if you want a new cover that Genbulein made before he disappeared from the internet. The two covers are below:
It's Amber Jewel from the 'From man to mare' series holding her doll.
The heart is who I call 'Cutie Mark' from Jet_Black's 'My Little Heartbreak' series.
It's a staredown between the thing inhabiting the doll and the entity living within HB's cutie mark.
Is there anything in particular that you thing should be improved or removed before I start? Something that sould be changed.
Before you suggest it, I'm going to tweak Derry's personality a little bit so he doesn't seem to be constantly listening to 'Crawling in my skin'.
FYI, my rewrites only replace the old chapters, so the initial story appearance is still there. They're not going to 'disappear'. That's stupid.
Wouldst thou be so inclined to display thine thoughts 'pon the established question prior?
Considering the MASSIVE amount of you that favorite that series, would you want me to rewrite it? It'd help with the fact that FMTM was my THIRD story so it's chock full of repetition repetition, spehlyng ehrers, inco'rect punctuat;ion placement's, and so forth. Shoot, it'd allow me to get rid of that awful MASSIVE time skip in the fourth one and allow me to flesh out the raising segment.
I've already concluded that my followers are either mostly dead(more bodies for necromancy projects!) or are too preoccupied with others things to read my stories...oooorrrrr answer my questions...or read the blogs asking questions and answer the questions..or bother to notice the blog because who am. Who am, Samaru? Who am? I've also accepted that my stories won't be viewed like they were in the past where I'd get quite a few hundred in a short while and several comments (I love reactions! So
And any of my posts? I've been getting iffy and have been learning that nothing I post seems to be getting noticed by the site. Alerts and notifications from me have apparently broken? As stated by a few users.
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Board up the windows! He's coming!