Oct
20th
2016
I'm preparing the From man to mare rewrite · 4:00pm Oct 20th, 2016
Is there anything in particular that you thing should be improved or removed before I start? Something that sould be changed.
Before you suggest it, I'm going to tweak Derry's personality a little bit so he doesn't seem to be constantly listening to 'Crawling in my skin'.
FYI, my rewrites only replace the old chapters, so the initial story appearance is still there. They're not going to 'disappear'. That's stupid.
Gosh darn it Another story to read before it goes poof! I hope i get to it. :(
4263430 It's not going poof. I'm just going to replace the chapters with the updated versions.
4263447 ...I'm just replacing the chapters. I've been doing the same thing with The true Psychopath.
So there's nothing you think needs improvement?
4263459 As written here, I'm already tweaking Derry's personality so there's going to be less angst. There'll also be less comic book effects where the sounds are shown rather than described.
4263465 ...I'm preparing to start. It's in the title!*yells loudly*
It'll be interesting to see how it is 'adjusted' when your done