Sep
25th
2016
Rewriting From man to mare? · 5:12pm Sep 25th, 2016
Wouldst thou be so inclined to display thine thoughts 'pon the established question prior?
Considering the MASSIVE amount of you that favorite that series, would you want me to rewrite it? It'd help with the fact that FMTM was my THIRD story so it's chock full of repetition repetition, spehlyng ehrers, inco'rect punctuat;ion placement's, and so forth. Shoot, it'd allow me to get rid of that awful MASSIVE time skip in the fourth one and allow me to flesh out the raising segment.
I think there's nothing wrong with trying that, go for it if you feel like doing it ^.^
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Then I'll complete The true Psychopath's rewrite and get to that as the next project then.
I have no qualms with fully supporting this venture.
Why not publish a rewrite as a separate story?
4226924 Site rules don't allow it.
4226937 "The changes need to be substantial."
If you just correct grammar and add several chapters, then yes, it's considered the same. Did you plan that as a rewrite?
Id read it. Adding some chapters over that time skip would be great as well.
4226937 I think you should take the same idea and apply a different twist on it. I liked the idea but looking back now I felt that it was too angsty. Just a tatd.
I think I'd prefer it if you rewrote the character as a bitter person but kind at times. With pacing. I'm sorry but the pacing was bad last time.
The idea was great though! And the plot held. Just add a brush of refinement.
4226978 The story would be the same. I'm just adding more details, removing obsolete ones, and redoing multiple scenes that weren't exactly 'stellar' in their appearance.
4227078 I know. That's exactly one of the things I'm going to refine. Remove the whiny. Add some 'ech'.
4227466 What do you mean by ech?
4227661 I mean bachum.
if you want to rewrite it rewrite it.