• Published 1st Sep 2014
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Fallout Equestria: The Mare Who is Emperor - Pen Mightier



I'm a toaster repair pony. But I've been forced to step into not only a dead stallion's shoes but also his armour and mask. I don't know whether his doubtfully heroic identity as 'Crystal Emperor' will save me or kill me

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Comments ( 20 )

Eh, not actually a fan of Fallout Equestria, or Fallout in general. No doubt great, given your past works, but you can't please everyone.:twilightblush:

Seems nice.

Sounds pretty cool. :pinkiehappy: I'll give it a read as soon as I finish up Viva Las Pegasus and FO:E - Silent Ponyvile.

Well if this is going somewhere, let's see where it goes.:ajsmug:

This smells like parody and fun

And toaster.


I like it

How often will you update?

I like this. Your protagonist has a good back story & motivation. Love her low self-esteem angle, "I'm worth 120,000 caps!"

Only thing I'll criticize is that you need to establish your setting a bit more. While most anyone reading this will know about Fallout:Equestrian, you'll always have a few who don't.

Doesn't have to be much! I'd have one paragraph for the wastelands in general, and probably two for your setting. That would help round it out.:twilightsmile:

Now that I think about it, Your main character's outfit reminds me a bit of Thor. So bonus points for design!

Ha loved it and faved very good

Hmmm...

I don't know... Some of the Fallout Spinoffs haven't really been for me-

*sees All Butlers Are Gentlemen in the story list to the right*

WELL THAT SELLS IT FOR ME!!! ON TO READING!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

awesome cant wait for more :twilightsmile:

MOAR!! YOUR LORD COMMANDS IT!!!

MORE!:flutterrage:

I mean if it's ok with you.:yay:

Don't you have too much stories already?

I like this so far. Can't wait to see where this goes.

this smells of potenchel

Why must all the good fics be deadfics?

Ah, well; amusing premise

Reads description :rainbowderp::rainbowwild:

Damn, this seemed like it could’ve been a fun one, too.

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