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PaulAsaran


Technical Writer from the U.S.A.'s Deep South. Writes horsewords and reviews. New reviews posted every other Thursday! Writing Motto: "Go Big or Go Home!"

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There's no way that the eternal student, Twilight Sparkle, would ever just walk up to the object of her affections and confess her love without preparation, right? So when she shows up at Rarity's doorstep, frazzled and out of sorts, to ask about love of all things, Rarity knows what she needs is to be taught. Of course, Rarity's no Princess, but she knows a thing or two about romance, so what else can the Element of Generosity do but offer lessons?

A couple pretend dates and some pretend kissing will give Twilight the knowledge and confidence she needs to ask her prospective special somepony out... But who is this mystery mare, anyway?

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A story taking place in the past (mostly), during the time when Velvet is but a young foal, and her father Stronghoof runs about trying to keep her in check!

When Velvet gets her eyes on a certain necklace, she ends up causing quite a bit of grief for poor Stronghoof in the process.

But thankfully, this story has a happy ending~

Cover Art Used with the permission of the artist, 0xyr0!

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The palace in Zephyr Heights would be a great target for any thieves, tourists, influencers, right? Well, not for the Tricky Triplets, who play pranks all across Equestria. Well, two of the three, anyway. The two cheeky fillies think they have scored when they break into the palace with their biggest prank yet!





Decided to revive a cancelled idea using ideas/concepts of new OCs

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Mang Fermin, local Manila street vendor, has died in his sleep. Macario, one of his regular customers, now has to go to work without seeing him and taking a bite of his wares as is tradition. At least there's a new guy with his own food cart, though he's not exactly from around here....


+ A four-chapter story. Daily updates are expected.
+ Pre-read and proofed by Venerable Ro.
+ This is an entry into Admiral Biscuit's Labor Day Challenge/Working Ponies Contest Thing (PoE) bookshelf. Huge thanks to the Biscuit for being the one that pushed me to the edge to write a fic like this.
+ Disclaimer: The photo used and modified in the cover, "[Philippine Day] BBQ", was done and is copyrighted by scion_cho under the CC-BY-2.0 license. Access the original photo here.

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Braeburn was young, gay and confused. Then his extended family from Ponyville came to visit in Appeloosa, and Braeburn finds himself even more confused as he tries to work through his feelings for his cousin Big Macintosh.


An introspective romance story featuring Braeburn and Big MacIntosh, written for the 2023 M/M Shipping Contest. (Oh, hey! Won judge's prize!)

Contains some strong homophobic language.

Feedback is appreciated, as brutal as it needs to be.

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A murder in small town Ponyville, a family divided, and a secret going back to Ponyville's early days. Detective Private Eye has the skills, the knowledge, and the cunning to solve the case. Accompanied by Twilight Sparkle the two hope to solve the mystery and put a stop to a plot against the town. But will Private be able to outrun his past or will it catch him in the end?

A Murder Mystery starring the cast from My Little Pony Friendship is Magic with flavors of Noir and Castle. If you love a good old fashioned mystery, complex characters, romance and even a little humor you will love this story. So sit back and enter the darker side of the pony universe.

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Fluttershy reveals to Rainbow Dash her fillyhood dream of giving birth to a foal. Rainbow sets out to find a way to make her marefriend's dream come true.

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Trixie's performance was a success, and out of it, she gained Starlight as a friend, but after waking up with a horrible itch all over her body, she quickly figures out that something went wrong during the performance, but what went wrong? Grimdark story :pinkiecrazy:

Starlight, Are We Friends or Not? [MLP Grimdark Reading]

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I think I was created to play music.
I think this because there is a gramophone on my back.
I think it is supposed to play music.
It does not.


This was inspired by a prompt generated by a story idea generator i’ve been working on. The prompt in question was “Write a gothic species swap story about Sweetie Belle with themes of autonomy and tragedy. For an optional challenge, try incorporating music.” I don’t think I stuck particularly well at all to the prompt, but the idea was moreso to inspire rather than create constraints.
Consider this an alternate take on a sweetiebot story with a splash of raritwi.


Cover Art by JulieKarbon

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Rusty Bones is a self-styled "Adventurer Extraordinaire". She had come across an old map showing a hitherto undiscovered pony civilization far in the Frozen North and now she is setting out on an expedition to explore these ancient ruins. The way will be difficult and perilous, but glory awaits!

Will she and her companions find what they are looking for in the depths under the northern ice?

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