So, I just got a review back from the Reviewer's Cafe for Not Every Mark is Cute. The reviewer said he thought Brawler had a bad case of the Mary Sue's, was 'badass' only in the emo hot topic sense, and was completely unlikable. He stated that he knew people who were 'fighters' and none of them act like Brawler. In fact he found the way Brawler acted to be insulting to people he cared about. He
Hey everyone. After extensive feedback of chapter 16 I decided to revise it. Not so much that you need to reread the whole thing though. Just a little explanation for Soul Magic and Celestia having a different reaction to the name on the wall.
The changes barely took more than five hundred words, so instead of rereading the whole chapter you can just read the revised parts here.
Hey everyone. I hope you enjoy chapter 16 of Not Every Mark is cute. I'm sorry it took so long and I have no excuse for it. I was able to write 4,000 words in one night, why the hell did it take me months to write 5,000?
Okay, it's finally my spring break. I finally have free time and I can finally work on Chapter 16 of Not Every Mark is Cute. It's going to be an important chapter. Lots of drama and action, hopefully that'll make this long unofficial hiatus worth it.
I'm sorry everybody, but the new chapter won't be up before 2017. I wanted to, but family vacation and post christmas celebrations distracted me. My new deadline is Jan 7 and at that point if I fail again I'm just being lazy and you're free to call me out on it.
Thank you all for your support I'm sorry this is taking so long.