Big Update · 2:19am Dec 8th, 2014
Greetings everyone,
So, my colleague/co-writer and I were going over certain key story elements- as I am nearing the end of this first little arc- and asked him how he would go about his portion of the narration; chiefly, the framing element. Apparently, from either zeal or trust, we had overlooked this issue in a very big way. After a couple hours, we managed to resolve/virtually destroy the issue and we shall all get to benefit from it; the greatest benefit being to the story. The framing element has been reworked and moved to prelude (where it probably should've been to begin with- I don't know, I guess I wanted to surprise or reveal it to you rather than simply display it). I would advise that everyone read the prelude again. It's only a page more, but it is extremely important to the nature of the story (also, you won't understand some of the other stuff that is to be discovered in my colleague's portion of Zero Hour). Thank you for your first read, and doubly for your second.
-sophos
