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sophos


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  • 396 weeks
    So I Deleted Zero Hour...

    Why? Because I want to start fresh(ish). I'm practically done with my fifth chapter and the rewrite of chapter four, but my co-writer has yet to finish his first. When he does, I have to expect I'll want to make some changes. And that he'll share that sentiment.

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  • 419 weeks
    Rewrite 2

    Wow, it's been almost a year. Six days shy of a year to be exact. And all I have to show you is a chapter rewrite. Granted, this chapter got even longer and had far more significant changes than the last two. And I'm satisfied with those changes. But it shouldn't have taken me this damn long.

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  • 471 weeks
    Rewrite

    Chapters one and two complete. Now for chapter three. You know, the one that's the size of both of them put together. Can't really complain; I'm liking the story a lot more now, and I hope you do as well. I am practically finished with chapter five-- well, I could say I'm done with it. It is my lengthiest chapter yet and it could be much larger, so I am deciding whether or not to split it into

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  • 476 weeks
    News Concerning Zero Hour

    I am rewriting my first chapter, I will very likely rewrite my second chapter, I will probably revise and reformat my third chapter, and etc. Chapter 5, which may or may not be done, will have to wait until such a time that I am satisfied with my revisions.

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  • 479 weeks
    This goes out to my 10 followers

    And please comment on this. I don't ask for much, and answering the following question requires nothing more than reading the first page of my first chapter of Zero Hour (the GDocs).

    And here is the question that has been niggling me: Should I rewrite it?

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Apr
12th
2015

News Concerning Zero Hour · 2:54am Apr 12th, 2015

I am rewriting my first chapter, I will very likely rewrite my second chapter, I will probably revise and reformat my third chapter, and etc. Chapter 5, which may or may not be done, will have to wait until such a time that I am satisfied with my revisions.

I thought I would be sorry that, those of you that bother that is, some readers will be reading my story all over again; but I'm actually quite relieved. I am enjoying the rewrite-- the way I enjoyed it when I first started writing this story. I didn't realize when I had lost my zeal, but I am overjoyed to have found it again; even more so, to put it to good use.

The rewrite will not be a completely different tale, but simply a retelling from a better storyteller with a keener sense of direction. I had prioritized Zero Hour as a project; practice for my colleague and I before we pursue our true ambitions. I wanted to keep everything in house and on a schedule, but I forgot that our chief priority was writing a good story.

In line with that goal, I have decided to no longer abstain from the wonderful resources provided here, at my fingertips. I will be making use of pre-readers, editors, and everything in between to ensure my story is quality; and at a much better pace than my colleague and I alone can manage.

I am glad that anyone likes the story as is, but I am positive you like the revised version even better; as I do.

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