R4 (Reactions, Reviews, Reference, Redirection) #0037 · 5:05pm Dec 2nd, 2014
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Here are five slightly edited old reviews:
Carrot Top of the Line by Fizzy Orange
Scootalong to the Cheer by Blackbelt
The School Talent Show by Blackbelt
A Hard Bargain by Zap Apple Smash
Greengrass’s Night by GrassAndClouds2
Carrot Top of the Line by Fizzy Orange
[story link] [my original review]
Good story. Was the first to present Fluttershy’s backstory that later fanfics in the Lunaverse used just as well without the exposition, but was still fun to see it here. I’ve been liking the opening credits song in the Lunaverse stories, but the end credits line has been bugging me. Hope the few authors that do it stop doing it.
Scootalong to the Cheer by Blackbelt
[story link] [my original review]
This one is fun, but starts a bit rough. Really should have used third-person perspective for the flashbacks when Cheerilee was telling about what happened that day. Still really liking the Lunaverse version of Cheerilee. Really, really liked the glimpses we get of Diamond Tiara here and her crush on Scootaloo. Want more stories about that.
The School Talent Show by Blackbelt
[story link] [my original review]
Yep. Now I really want more adorable stories about Diamond Tiara and Scootaloo romantic sweetness. Will have to check if this author has done more stories like this and the previous one.
A Hard Bargain by Zap Apple Smash
[story link] [my original review]
Pretty good. Pinkie Pie appearances were awkward and there were a few other rough spots in the story. Do like the Big Macintosh that shows up here, and rough’n’tumble Lunaverse Cheerliee has always been fun.
Greengrass’s Night by GrassAndClouds2
[story link] [my original review]
Good villain building. Not really needed as the other stories in the Lunaverse ‘season’ paint a great picture of him, but sometimes it is fun to read about a good slimy villain. Could have used a bit more MLP though. Was pretty much just some backstabbing politics that could have been in nearly any story. Lunaverse, which would be obvious because it involves the big villain in season one for the main characters.
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