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Jetfire2012


Excited to finally have a FIMfiction account! Will post my stuff here now.

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  • 348 weeks
    Fantasy Novels

    Many of the comments to my previous blog entry were asking if there was any way of acquiring the fantasy books I mentioned. As I said, my goal is to get an agent and then a book deal, so at this time I've decided against self-publishing.

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    164 comments · 5,231 views
  • 349 weeks
    August Update

    Hello! It's been some time. I suppose I should keep everyone abreast of the latest goings-on in my life, which, alas, include no MLP fanfiction.

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    8 comments · 1,537 views
  • 370 weeks
    New Stories Possible

    Dusting off the cobwebs here. It's been a while, hasn't it? I've been writing original fiction most of this time--that, and going to graduate school. Even as we speak I'm working on a fantasy novel, which is the second in a series I've been writing.

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    11 comments · 688 views
  • 423 weeks
    Update For My Friends

    Hello everyone!

    I realize I've been terribly quiet for some time now, and that the 'sequel short story' I was writing for Besides the Will of Evil never really materialized. For anyone who was anticipating it, I very much apologize.

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    7 comments · 821 views
  • 438 weeks
    Calling Mapmakers

    It occurs to me that one of the things Ardo Roccolato has been missing is a map--a way to locate the various countries of my world in their relations to each other. Does anyone know of any good fandom mapmakers? I'm willing to commission someone. I'd just like a visual depiction of the various lands I've written about--Equestria, Gildedale, the Crystal Empire, the Shimmerwood, Issidonia,

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    10 comments · 800 views
Oct
26th
2014

Story Spotlight: All In - An Applejack Noir · 8:56pm Oct 26th, 2014

I have always believed, as a writer, that fellow writers of good quality are to be celebrated. In writing and authorship, a rising tide lifts all boats, and works of quality deserve to have attention called to them.

In that spirit, I'd like to steer everyone following me toward a new story I've just recently discovered:

All In - An Applejack Noir

The setting is Manehattan in an alternate reality from the show, one where Applejack never left the city after going there in "Cutie Mark Chronicles," and where, somewhat later, Nightmare Moon triumphed over Celestia. This city, swathed in endless night, has coal black shadows, hardened ponies, and a vicious element that lurks an inch below the surface. Amid the noir intrigue, Applejack plies her trade as a private investigator, showing off much of the same character that she displays in the show: hard, but with an element of sweetness. A stallion comes to her one day, asking her to help him find his fiance. The case quickly plunges Applejack into a web of danger, putting her very life at risk.

The story is well-written, and maintains the moody darkness of so much old-fashioned film noir. AJ's character makes her well-suited to a Sam Spade/Philip Marlowe role; thus far, her movements through the seedy underbelly of Manehattan are a grim delight. Best of all, we're only three chapters into what should prove to be a long, uncertain journey. It's always fun to jump aboard a fic as it's starting out, and this is a prime opportunity to do so.

It only has 450 views so far, which is far too little, in my opinion. Check it out.

Report Jetfire2012 · 728 views · Story: Besides the Will of Evil ·
Comments ( 3 )

Mah boy Sock getting some love? :yay:

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Sock-san needs more lurve.

Well, sir, thank you for taking notice of my little fic. And thank you very much for taking the time to call attention to it. I daresay you've done a better job describing the story, its setting, and its characters than I have. :derpytongue2:

I wish I could repay you in some fashion other than by adding another follower to your already prodigious count. I guess the story itself is going to have to suffice. I'll try not to disappoint.

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