Some Feedback Would Be Helpful.

Hey everypony. I would really appreciate some feedback on my story The Lunar Family if it's not too much to ask, I'm don't want to try to force anyone, I just hope I haven't let my readers down. When I don't see comments and few likes, I feel I failed everyone. I'm sorry that I sound desperate and needy, but it would be helpful to know how I am doing with the story. If it helps, I'll see if I can find a group to add it to. Again really sorry for sounding desperate.