Changing things.

Yeah, so I took a segment out of the last chapter of Flames and Twilight. I finished the newest chapter... but I pretty much hate it. Stress plus a massive IRL workload and the desire to finish this Celestia-damned story led me to write the crappiest thing I've written.

In Chapter Seven, I've removed the scene where Celestia and the Mane Six are fighting Darkrai, Sombra and Chrysalis. I have some new ideas I want to try first and that scene just wouldn't work with what I have planned.

To anypony that thought that Twilight might be pregnant... well at first, you would have been correct, but Letter pointed out a massive plot hole regarding that fact so the entire plan is scrapped.

I will try my best to get out a chapter that you guys deserve... please be patient a little bit longer...

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Comments

[Spacecowboy]

See? This is what happens hen you go through and fuck with an already perfectly acceptable story, mkay?

Yet another reminder to myself why I should never rewrite anything, ever, once it's published. The ensuing fallout it can creatis ginormous.

As for the story stuff, you have plenty of time to knock up Twilight if you wanna go that route. Hormonal, OCD, somewhat neurotic mare? I don't think Equestria could survive that.

[Karsap]

In Chapter Seven, I've removed the scene where Celestia and the Mane Six are fighting Darkrai, Sombra and Chrysalis. I have some new ideas I want to try first and that scene just wouldn't work with what I have planned.

Aw man I like that scene.