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Sun Dancer


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Oh, Sun Dancer? Sorry that I'm so late to say this, but thank you for faving Daring Do and the Relic of the Four! I appreciate it!

703004 I'm not amazing enough to have an editor.

:twilightsmile:

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Hmm. I really liked the idea of your story, (which, obviously is why I fav'd :pinkiesmile:)
but I thought that, especially in the first chapter, the pacing was just a little rushed. That's really the only major thing I found, so fixing that and maybe getting an editor to just glance over your chapters before you publish them would make this story totally awesome.:yay:

I'm very curious to see where you go with this, and I hope the next chapter's up soon!:twilightsmile:

Thanks for the favorite! :raritywink:

May I ask what you liked or disliked in particular?

:D

Hey, ya know what the best part writing Children of a Lesser Dragon God Boy Whelp Thingy Guy is? Getting to come and thank all the great folks like you who Faved it!:twilightsmile:

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