When the library receives a letter from Celestia asking for the assistance of the Elements of Harmony, Twilight gathers her friends for a mission to face a dangerous foe. But what will happen when this problem is much bigger than Twilight expected, and will leave her helpless, at the mercy of the monster's claws?
And then I thumbed up.
Aww crap, I looked at the chapter names. I can tell I'm not gonna like the last one. Good first chapter, though
Thanks guys! This was my first story and I'd say it was pretty good for a 13 year old with little to no experience!
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Hey, at least try to get to the chapter, ok? I tried pretty hard to make this sound kinda good.
Sorry about some missing letters in words and stuff! I guess my fingers just missed them. Like w instead of we, die instead of side, and an instead of and.
Haha she clopped across the library floor
*clears throat* hehe ok well away from that subject, great chapter, this looks like a pretty good read gonna like and fave
GAAHH!! HAND!!!
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Easiest and most common mistake made on this site, yes?
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So far, me gusta
If the "blue winged pony" dies I'm gonna fuck yo' shit up.
I'm gonna find you Slender Dash. NO ONE KILLS DASHIE. NO ONE.
>>ChewyJiggles >>rainbow87dash
No! I put hand! SO mad at myself! And by clopped I meant walked, not the other thing. Who would clop to a door?
Hey, sorry bro, about Rainbow Dash. Believe me, this story was hard to write. Rainbow Dash was my FAVORITE pony, and actually, in real life, I am so similar to her in attitude and character, I call myself Rainbow Dash. So basically, I cried writing this story because it was hard to do and I had to kill myself.
Holy fuck. I cried. I just cried enough to counteract all the effects of global warming. That was so fucking SAD Ohmygod why
Liked and favorited
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Thanks a lot! I really appreciate the likes and favorites
The story was a tragedy, so I was going for a lot of emotion. So, I guess crying over the story isn't a bad thing.
I like it so much I could not stop cry and I'm reading this at 1:02 am
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Thanks! I really put a lot of effort into this story, and it's my first
That ending hurt
So sad
Oh god so sad I'm pretty sure I cried forever when I read this! Why Rainbow why?! It was a good read though! Little mistakes and very interesting!
If a fic ever made me cry, this was it. The emotions were very strongly written, and I absolutely love this story. Instant favorite
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Thanks so much!!