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Slender Dash


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When the library receives a letter from Celestia asking for the assistance of the Elements of Harmony, Twilight gathers her friends for a mission to face a dangerous foe. But what will happen when this problem is much bigger than Twilight expected, and will leave her helpless, at the mercy of the monster's claws?

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Comments ( 21 )

And then I thumbed up.

Aww crap, I looked at the chapter names. I can tell I'm not gonna like the last one. Good first chapter, though :twilightsmile:

Thanks guys!:heart::pinkiehappy: This was my first story and I'd say it was pretty good for a 13 year old with little to no experience! :rainbowdetermined2::twilightblush:

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Hey, at least try to get to the chapter, ok? I tried pretty hard to make this sound kinda good.

Sorry about some missing letters in words and stuff! I guess my fingers just missed them. Like w instead of we, die instead of side, and an instead of and. :rainbowhuh:

Haha she clopped across the library floor :rainbowlaugh:
*clears throat* hehe ok well away from that subject, great chapter, this looks like a pretty good read gonna like and fave :pinkiehappy:

“Thanks for everything, Rainbow,” I sniffled, then moved up my hand and slid her eyes closed

GAAHH!! HAND!!!

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Easiest and most common mistake made on this site, yes? :twilightangry2:

If the "blue winged pony" dies I'm gonna fuck yo' shit up. :rainbowderp: :flutterrage:

I'm gonna find you Slender Dash. NO ONE KILLS DASHIE. NO ONE. :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

>>ChewyJiggles >>rainbow87dash

No! I put hand! :flutterrage: SO mad at myself! And by clopped I meant walked, not the other thing. Who would clop to a door? :rainbowlaugh:

Hey, sorry bro, about Rainbow Dash. Believe me, this story was hard to write. Rainbow Dash was my FAVORITE pony, and actually, in real life, I am so similar to her in attitude and character, I call myself Rainbow Dash. So basically, I cried writing this story because it was hard to do and I had to kill myself.

Holy fuck. I cried. I just cried enough to counteract all the effects of global warming. :raritycry: That :raritydespair: was :ajsleepy: so :applecry: fucking :fluttershyouch: SAD :fluttercry: Ohmygod why


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Thanks a lot! I really appreciate the likes and favorites :rainbowkiss:

The story was a tragedy, so I was going for a lot of emotion. So, I guess crying over the story isn't a bad thing. :pinkiesmile::twilightblush:

I like it so much I could not stop cry and I'm reading this at 1:02 am:raritycry:

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Thanks! I really put a lot of effort into this story, and it's my first:twilightsmile:

Oh god so sad :fluttershbad: I'm pretty sure I cried forever when I read this! :raritycry: Why Rainbow why?! :raritydespair: It was a good read though! Little mistakes and very interesting! :ajsmug:

If a fic ever made me cry, this was it. The emotions were very strongly written, and I absolutely love this story. Instant favorite :twilightsmile:

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