Hello gentle readers (yeah, I'm talking to you!)

PLEASE. PLEASE. PLEASE give me some feedback on the story so far, the characters, the plot, pacing, writing style, what you would like to see happen... anything, PLEASE!

I started this as a learning exercise and to develop my writing skills. I must admit that I enjoy do this enormously, but I would nevertheless very much appreciate your comments and suggestions for improvement.

Warmest regards,

Dafaddah the Bearded

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Chapter 6 was a challenge, but I am really happy with how it developed. Having parallel characters as well as situations is both constraining and a great opportunity for a few laughs! In the next chapter we finally get back to Celestia's PoV, and more is revealed of her (and Luna's) past as well as their place in the universe, and how they shaped politics and life in Equestria.

I am finaly getting to those conversations that describe some of the history of Equestria and try to provide answers to some burning questions (well at least these questions were burning in my mind as the FIM episodes that dealt with the founding and history of Equestria were broadcast.)
1) why does Equestrian culture have so many parallels to Humanity's science, architecture, science and art?

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I just posted the first chapter of the first fanfic story I've written entitled "The good of the many". I intend to explore a bit more the governing structure established by the Equestrian goddess-princesses, and the events and decisions that have led up to it.

Of ourse, constructive criticism is very welcome, although nasty criticism can also be fun!