Hello guys, I'm trying my hand at comedy and wanted to know if this sample is funny or not:
Steam Strider jolts up from his bunk as the normal five am alarm goes off throughout Stable Six, something the quite frail unicorn forgot as he up a hoof over his mouth to stop him from expressing his surprise. He soon withdrew his hoof and gasped loudly, looking around erratically in the still very dark room.
Hers the deal, a lot of things, mostly dealing with family and my own mental health (depression, hopefully not clinical) have recently been mucking up my life. I failing school due to my own negligence, gotten into a lot of arguments with my family trying to explain why I've been cutting school, had a ton of guilt placed on me by myself and family, me being unhappy living with my mother (for a very long time), and even considered suicide. (Thankfully I'm quite better now.)
Well, the prequel to my The Walking Dead Conversion fic, The Hidden Cabin is almost done! Just about a thousand or so words left (hopefully).
It's been so much fun writing this piece, so many hours have been poured into this piece its almost tear jerking to stop. So *sniff* anyway, I'll see if I could finish it up tonight and send it to submission! Hope you guys enjoy. :)