Because I am tired of keeping you guys waiting, and because of a nice read-through by Twi-Guy I will plan on submitting my story, "The Unluckiest, Lucky Colt in Equestria" tomorrow.
Tonight, after I return home from the movies, I will post a final version of the story and publish it for you guys to check out. Otherwise, as it stands now, I will finalize it tonight and sent it in to moderation tomorrow.