UGh, the problem with writing a half-decent story is it's impossible to follow it up. I've improved quite a bit on descriptive language in what I've written so far but the pacing I worked so hard to improve on just blew itself into oblivion, and I really don't know how I'm going to rescue it Perhaps I should have a fast introduction and then slow things right down afterwards, but I'm not sure that would work. I've made 2 unsuccessful attempts to write this thing and I really don't

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Okay so after 2 weeks of not writing a Trixie story I can't cope any more, I need my Trixie fix X'D So expect a new story involving Trixie to come out in the next 2 weeks X'D I'm going to get planning right now. Also it's the school holidays so I'll actually get time XD

One day, Trixie decided to make a rap to promote her next show. Then this happened:

(To this beat: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sbNJyhZJjDU )

Trixie, gonna rock this stage, gonna take this art form to the next page
Gonna smash the competition like she’s smashing this beat
Doesn’t know the meaning of the word “defeat”

Yeah Trixie, gonna rock this stage, gonna take this art form to the next page
Gonna smash the competition like she’s smashing this beat

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EDIT: I reshuffled these a little bit after the last story I wrote, so here they are in their current form:

RAINBOW, DERPY & SCOOTALOO STORY
THE IMPERFECT STORM
Rainbow Dash – the captain of the Wonderbolts, the element of Loyalty and the most important Pegasus in Equestria – is out of action! Two of her closest friends, Derpy Hooves and Scootaloo, are left to try to fill in for her – emphasis on try!
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SPIKE STORY
SPIKE’S TALE

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Well, there's a lot to talk about here. Overall I think it was a pretty awesome episode. I can't say best of season 5 because there's just been so much awesomeness in season 5, but it's up there, in the top 10, which might not be much most seasons but like I said, this is season 5 XD

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(Sorry for the delay guys, final chapter of Out of Place is definitely on the way this week)

Huh. So this is apparently a genre?

To be honest it's a bit of a bland idea for a genre - MLP is a character-focused series, pushing the characters into the background to focus on a war just misses the entire appeal of MLP.

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Well I just watched the last episode and it was friggin AWESOME, but it also got me thinking, what if Trixie Lulamoon had a manager XD She's always run everything herself which must take a lot of talent, not just with magic tricks but also lighting, advertising, stage building. It would also require her to be a fiercely independent control freak, which she is, in an adorable Trixie kind of way xD So imagine if somepony volunteered to be her manager, I don't think it'd work out very well X'D

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Sorry everyone, I just got dumped with multiple assignments from school and I'm also a bit unsure about the ending of the story so Out of Place will be delayed by up to a week. I appreciate your patience sticking with it till the end, personally I feel it hasn't been turning out as well as I hoped but most of you seem to like it based on the likes vs dislikes so I'll keep going with it. I'm just eager to get onto a Scootaloo story again. I love Trixie heaps but I think I'm all Trixied

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Okay, so I don't know what order they're going to be in, but I thought I should share with you the main characters in the next few stories.

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I'm really sorry guys, I do appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on what I write, and I'm definitely coming back in a week or two, but there's a heap of other projects I really need to focus on. So I'll see you then, again, sorry for keeping you waiting. I have a school newsletter article to write, I have to make a satirical comic for English and I'm also coming up with episode ideas for a YouTube cartoon series my friends on DeviantArt are making with me, so I've got way too much

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