Sup.
Hello all, just writing random things here.
Recently I got back to playing Civ 5 for some reason. So much to the point that I played like 12 hour straight till morning before a finals I had. What that game appeals to me is the several pony mods that you could build civilizations with and wage war against other ponies. In fact I've never played the actual game modes.
Yesterday I played with the Fallout Equestria mods. It was quite cool and reminds me of how I used to love FoE.
Umph.
New chapter.
Honestly shouldn't have posted at this hour, very bad strategically for maximum exposure… hope that's not a problem.
Also, to everyone, I don't just write about cutting stuff, in fact I have an "everyone" one shot lined up. It's WIP and still doesn't have a shape, I hope my current story wouldn't deter you away from me, or give a false impression of what I am and do.
Spoilers ahead:
I've done some editing and I would say proofreading is 90% complete. I'm still not sure with a lot of sentence structures and how things are phrased, but despite some basic grammar I don't think I'll be going through the chapter in details again. If you'd like to give some suggestions on grammar, please comment here. I appreciate it. The link to the story can be found here as well.
Chapter done, editing started.
Well, editing it is, it's more like 5% of the grammatical errors edited, continuity glanced over and mediocre writing left untouched because it'll be easier and faster. Also I haven't find someone to go over it.
That being said, I hope it'll work out. I hope you'll like it.