2015-6-24

Chapter done, editing started.

Well, editing it is, it's more like 5% of the grammatical errors edited, continuity glanced over and mediocre writing left untouched because it'll be easier and faster. Also I haven't find someone to go over it.

That being said, I hope it'll work out. I hope you'll like it.

Also just a note, this is the 2nd out of 3 chapter. This is because a) it happened to be longer than anticipated, b) I think Thunderlane deserves a chapter of his own *wink wink*, c) time and d) so if anything I can adjust the tone and direction of the last part.

Let me know what you think.