Publishing soon · 5:35pm Jul 3rd, 2015
Spoilers ahead:
I've done some editing and I would say proofreading is 90% complete. I'm still not sure with a lot of sentence structures and how things are phrased, but despite some basic grammar I don't think I'll be going through the chapter in details again. If you'd like to give some suggestions on grammar, please comment here. I appreciate it. The link to the story can be found here as well.
I'll be going through the chapter for basic grammar before posting it live in a couple of days. I do apologize for the delay, and that after all these time the grammar, phrasing and overall quality may not be up to par, at least not my own par. However, the reader is the judge if it's actually good or not, since i always loathe my work and my very own self, so please let me know if you like it or not. I'm grateful for it.
Here is the link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/krud4sgxyh2hyr2/the%20juicy%20part.txt?dl=0
It's the full chapter and the actual document I write on, so if you prefer the final version, please wait for a fee more days. 
P.S.: On a very unrelated note, well… if you're a fan of RP and a fan of the type of things featured in this story, PM me. 
I might be shy about it, and shy about talking with new people in general, but I'd be thrilled to do RP on this and some other stuff as well. Let me know, we can see.
