"Fiddlesticks's Farewell" posted on EQD! · 2:38am Nov 18th, 2013
Just a testament to how much you can improve your first story if you just keep editing it until you get it posted.
http://www.equestriadaily.com/2013/11/story-fiddlestickss-farewell.html
All it took was three months of careful editing and lots of help from the pre-readers.
Thanks to everyone who helped!