"Life Is Not Fair" Re-Written Ending

I never really liked the ending for Life Is Not Fair. It left Rainbow Dash with no character development, and the whole "reading to a tombstone" thing made it seem like she hadn't learned anything and wasn't moving on from Ivy's death.

EQD didn't like it either, and one of their pre-readers gave me a bunch of suggestions when the story came back. As such, I re-wrote it, with Rainbow Dash learning an important lesson about moving on and Twilight showing a bit more maturity and understanding than she did originally.

I dunno if this will get it on EQD, but it does make me like the story more. It also means the Living Players performance is now "obsolete," so if any of you listen to it and then wonder why the ending is different, now you know.