That was actually disturbing. Faved.
Your chapters are a little too short though.

sheesh, it's like something out of the "jeff the killer" creepypasta

*insta-faves*

What the heck, I'm feeling demented psychotic type reading today so lets see where this story goes...
guess my usual sig is kinda off topic for this... or maybe not.

I do not see a derpy pony.
I see Derpy, a pony.
one day I will figure out how to get a sig on fimfiction.

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Sorry, I'll fix it.