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Insta like for Jeff the killer on this story
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Thanks
Just needs some revision and more creative sentence structures, but overall I think you've got something. ;)
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hope you continue soon:)
I've noticed when you punctuate, you don't space at all. Other than that, this is pretty okay! I've got to keep an eye on this.
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thank you
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I'm probably gonna start a new chapter tomorrow but I can't promise anything,and thank you for reading this
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dude,wat do u mean,USE WORDS
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kool
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words,words,USE FREAKIN WORDS
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oh,I see,you're a troll too,aren't you
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hello,fello troll,HEY I MADE A RHYME
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I...have no idea wat u meant by that comment
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XD
Wow! I'm amazed with this story! Adding my two favorite things together... wow! Creepy, you're a great author. Now, if only this would go on my Wiki... XD
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:3,it'll be there eventually...I hope XD
Also Creepy, may I make a critique? When you're writing, space out words from punctuation. It makes it harder to read when the words are squished together, as well as makes the words seem like they're one. Other than that, you're doing pretty well!
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I'm working on that! I'm gonna ask some people to edit the story. But for the punctuation space thing, I'm already starting to fix that
I'm impressed! But, did you really have to put that first picture of Smile Dog? Now, I'm a bit creeped out...
Anyway, I like the fact that you took my advice to heart about spacing out punctuation. Can't wait to hear more! 
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Yes, I had to add that to give the readers a little visual of Smile Dog itself, and to creep people out is something I really like to do. And thanks for reading, it means A LOT to me that you appreciate my stories
So cool! Slendy vs Rainbow... genius! Your best chapter yet! I can't wait to see Jeff face off!
Thanks, but I plan for Jeff to keep his face (get it?)
whatever XD
Oooh! This is getting so exciting! I can't wait until I see what Jeff has planned... oh and the next chapter.
Anyway, great job! 
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Thanks Ry
And the next chapter is in the works
Great job! I don't even like Yuri but that was wonderful!
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter! 
Thanks..
moooore.... MOORE I SAY
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I'm thinking of the plot for the next chapter. thank you :)
dude, This story has so many plot holes and it's rushed to high hell! I mean, come on! Make it more interesting! The plot itself is promising, but the way you keep executing it is rediculous!
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Okay, I don't know whether to take that as constructive criticism or pure criticism
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2972791 I doubt this is the last of smile dog...
I'm betting twilight finds a colt or filly who says "The grin remains" and with twilight's back " and so does the dog" and then she turns back only to find a picture of smile dog with an even scarier smile but Angery eyes.
Once again, I'd like to apologize for the long hiatus of updates.
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Allow me to state that Equestria isn't that technologically advanced. Why else do you think Candle Cove wasn't in this as well? I know that I could've put BEN in with a Button Mash chapter but that would end up making Button fucking killing himself. I may have killed off Lyra and Doctor Whooves, but I'm not that cold.
And where would that end up? The mane six fighting a statue? I didn't know too many of the Creepy Pasta monsters when I first made this.
I wish to make a sequel to this, so maybe BEN will be there.
Plus, I never planned to make Cupcakes or Rocket to Insanity a part of this story. They just wouldn't fit very well. I could see it working in the future. But I don't know.
Also, you might see Ticci-Toby in the sequel.
wow it is so cool please update soon I love it!!!!!
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I will make as much progress as I can tomorrow. Im sorry to say this but the chapter after the next will be the end.
However, like I said in a past comment I plan to make a sequel