Wow! I'm amazed with this story! Adding my two favorite things together... wow! Creepy, you're a great author. Now, if only this would go on my Wiki... XD

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:3,it'll be there eventually...I hope XD

Also Creepy, may I make a critique? When you're writing, space out words from punctuation. It makes it harder to read when the words are squished together, as well as makes the words seem like they're one. Other than that, you're doing pretty well!

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I'm working on that! I'm gonna ask some people to edit the story. But for the punctuation space thing, I'm already starting to fix that