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The Fog

Twilight encounters a strange fog, and knows little about it, or how she can get home.

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Johnfreemanwepon

Johnfreemanwepon #1 · Feb 7th, 2012 · · ·

*Klaxon sounding* WARNING! WARNING! WALL OF TEXT ALERT!

Seriously, though, break it up more- split up the paragraphs and space them out more than they are.

I like the way this story is going, though.

mrspecksbrony

mrspecksbrony #2 · Feb 7th, 2012 · · ·

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Alright, I see what I can do. ^^

Pandela

Pandela #3 · Jul 26th, 2012 · · ·

Whoa, I just wrote a fic before seeing this. They are actually quite simular in style.
What is the most interesting is that my fic is also named The Fog

So yeah, I didnt copy you at all, im just amazed at the simularity!